by Boxlicker101
You are good at any type of writing you do. One of my favorite authors, really.
But your stories just aren't hot enough. Why would anyone cum from reading this story? How about a taste of filthy language. Some pain that isn't just part of a routine. Anything. We can take it!
My GF loves the IDEA of having her bottom soundly spanked with a thick leather belt.
However, in her case, 5 semi-hard licks reduces her to loud sobs and a very hot pussy. We then "finish" in the usual doggy style.
I know she still fantasizes being strapped hard and long. In reality the pain from the actual whipping is even too much for her limits.