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Excellent:
This appears to be a brand new author who uses a theme that could be applied to any couple: straight, gay, transexual, etc... Accepting a person as they are, and not trying to change them into something that they are not. Love makes us want the best for the people close to us, but we shouldn't and can't change who they really are.
my new favorite
Fantastic story. Really well written, excellent use of setting, and the characters are genuinely believable. I hope you plan on writing a continuation. ^_^v
Truly Exciting!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! The only "downer" was that the couple did not consumate their relationship. I read with growing anticipation. Hopefully their will be a continuation!
Wierd but Good
Slightly wierd but very good. It stretched an Australians meagre knowledge of Baseball a bit but at least they weren't into Cricket!
Wonderfully Fresh Story
What a great story. The sex was good, but the real human emotion in your story was Great! Gonna check out Ch, 02 now, thanks. Bravo!
A Home Run
Superbly fleshed out story and sublime message. Attraction and open-minded values triumph snap judgments. Great story with good moral.
Definetly a twist
Let's you say that value people for what they are, the good ones sometimes surprise you. the not so good may let you down.
Great story
Thank You
What a wonderful story...thank you for taking the time to write it.
beautiful
That was an absolutely beautiful story! I haven't encountered anything like it before (anywhere!), and I would never have predicted such a romantic and profound ending.
I'm going to check out the sequel now.
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