I have really tried, but I cannot handle all the guys and all the loveless sex. All these girls are mentally ill. Sorry Steve W, somehow in The Circle this made sense, but in this one it simply doesn't. I found myself reading very little of this chapter. Nothing is special any more at all.
Anonymous hasn't read all of the stories you have authored. There some very common threads through each of them. So that person isn't satisfied is not a problem with the hundreds of us who love to read these tales of wickedness.
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Anonymous11/30/16
Sluts & Fucks
This is nothing but sluts and fucks, and now you're going to another participant. No story here
I've plowed thru 20 chapters expecting to find an actual story being told in there somewhere. I had hoped the training by the girls was supposed to kick start an actual plot. The group inspirations from another author's stories are fairly obvious, but lack any semblance of actually story telling. The chapters read like one or two page yankfests with the same characters. Then the extra people just start piling on to further confuse any coherent plot direction. I had high hopes when I started. But after 20 chapters I'm burned out.
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I'm done with this
I have really tried, but I cannot handle all the guys and all the loveless sex. All these girls are mentally ill. Sorry Steve W, somehow in The Circle this made sense, but in this one it simply doesn't. I found myself reading very little of this chapter. Nothing is special any more at all.
Apparently!
Anonymous hasn't read all of the stories you have authored. There some very common threads through each of them. So that person isn't satisfied is not a problem with the hundreds of us who love to read these tales of wickedness.
Sluts & Fucks
This is nothing but sluts and fucks, and now you're going to another participant. No story here
Where's the story?
I've plowed thru 20 chapters expecting to find an actual story being told in there somewhere. I had hoped the training by the girls was supposed to kick start an actual plot. The group inspirations from another author's stories are fairly obvious, but lack any semblance of actually story telling. The chapters read like one or two page yankfests with the same characters. Then the extra people just start piling on to further confuse any coherent plot direction. I had high hopes when I started. But after 20 chapters I'm burned out.
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