Great descriptions. Very harsh, likely too painful for most in real life, but just right for fantasy. Five stars!
A great story -- thank you -- five stars and well done! (=) (=)
Well written and pushed most of my buttons--if only she smoked cigars it would be perfect.
Thanks all for the positive feedback, much appreciated.
Great switch twist at the end, great job!
I have experienced caning and your words presented the best parts.
So delicately scripted. Unbelievably accurate, having been on the receiving end. Please write the next chapter.
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Great descriptions. Very harsh, likely too painful for most in real life, but just right for fantasy. Five stars!
Loved it!
A great story -- thank you -- five stars and well done!
(=) (=)
Very nice
Well written and pushed most of my buttons--if only she smoked cigars it would be perfect.
Thank you
Thanks all for the positive feedback, much appreciated.
Awesome!
Great switch twist at the end, great job!
Nice job
I have experienced caning and your words presented the best parts.
Well planned and shared.
So delicately scripted. Unbelievably accurate, having been on the receiving end.
Please write the next chapter.
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