Good story, but expected more like the first chapter, as the author already knows. I understand that you can not always write to everyone's liking, but I hoped that this final chapter would be a little longer and would describe more the life together of Chet and Jess.
Anyway, I give you 5 *.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
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Anonymous12/01/16
quod story but
The ending was a bit of a dud.
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Anonymous12/06/16
Ending
Excellent story only one problem the ending I feel was a little bit rushed and too short
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Anonymous12/20/16
Lost the Plot
Really enjoyed chapter one but it degenerated into rubbish after that.
Sad because that story had so much potential that wasn't realized.
The last chapter felt like you really just wanted to bale out as you knew you'd stuffed it up.
But your original story line was great.
Keep it less complicated in the future and you'll do O.K.
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Anonymous02/23/17
Are you gonna continue the story?
You should keep the story going because it's not a good ending
English
Good story, but ..
Good story, but expected more like the first chapter, as the author already knows. I understand that you can not always write to everyone's liking, but I hoped that this final chapter would be a little longer and would describe more the life together of Chet and Jess.
Anyway, I give you 5 *.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
quod story but
The ending was a bit of a dud.
Ending
Excellent story only one problem the ending I feel was a little bit rushed and too short
Lost the Plot
Really enjoyed chapter one but it degenerated into rubbish after that.
Sad because that story had so much potential that wasn't realized.
The last chapter felt like you really just wanted to bale out as you knew you'd stuffed it up.
But your original story line was great.
Keep it less complicated in the future and you'll do O.K.
Are you gonna continue the story?
You should keep the story going because it's not a good ending
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