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Reality~
wonderful tale you wove here, put my name in there and you would have reality, I couldn't believe my eyes when I read this, it was like you wrote about a day I had not to long ago...minus the great girl. Heartfelt tale, maggie, turely marvelous. I still write short stories for fun, contests, chain stories etc...but I have focussed more on completion of novels and books now after a day just like your story. Editors are wonderful if you find the right one. I have to ask if perhaps you had this type day too. Well I loved your story and still recall the kind words you left me on a story of mine when others commented on grammer. Thank You
Great!
Wow i loved it i hope there are more chapters!
Ahaaa...
That's nice.
Nice
This is a wonderful and sexy love story with a happy ending. I guess I'm an old romantic at heart. :)
Thanks for sharing your work.
Best friends make...
Best friends make the best lovers as I have been told. jeanne had to have been strong to hang on to her love for Brad after two marriages and take him in when he was tossed out of his house. After all these years, she never had serious affair with another man?
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