All Comments on 'John set His Wife Up with a Lesbian'

Just no.

As a red blooded straight man, I find there is nothing like a good lesbian story. And this was nothing like a good lesbian story.

Years ago my wife and I were at a party, and this younger woman was constantly hitting on my wife. I said to my wife, "I think she wants you!" My wife replied, "I think so too." "Go for it," I said. She answered, "Yuck! No way!" When we arrived home we had great sex, including 69, and didn't get to sleep until around three in the morning.

I said, "Let's invite Laura over for dinner. I'll make shrimp scampi." It all took place a week later. My wife wore a new short denim skirt and Laura arrived in a pant suit. We had wine with dinner and everyone enjoyed the meal. After clearing away the dishes, I kissed my wife on the lips, held the kiss and even gave her some tongue, and said "I have some catching up to do at the office. I'll be back in a couple of hours." When I arrived home, Laura was gone and my wife was asleep. Early the next morning I awoke to my wife giving me a blowjob. "That's thanks for what you did for me last night," she said.

Really bad story! Sorry, but it is.

Ok, definitely could have been better; but mainly just incomplete.

First off, Susan's husband had no right to set her up to be raped by a woman, much less help her do it, it should have been the wife's idea to have sex with another woman not her husband, even though susan did enjoy it after the shock wore off he still had no right, too bad there is no stars lower than 1 because this story deserves it , this is one time I hope there is no more parts

This was fucking terrible

No offence, but from one writer to another this needs improvement. Feel free to message me if you want any help.

illiterate shit.

Terrible story - bad storyline badly written, Site is called LitEROTICA - & theres nothing erotic about that

This is a great story idea. It just isn't set up well and is too rushed. Don't give up because the concept is very good.

Its not very often I give a 1 but this is appalling a reasonable concept handed like a 13 year old. Have your wank first then write the story. Don't do it during the writing of the story!!!

I bet the author splattered all over the screen halfway through and just decided to end the story early.

GOOD STORY LINE -Almighty Rush - The theme could be Milked for its potential, First lengthen the preliminaries; second, Elaborate on the actual Seduction with or without Husband, THIRD - The ending can be explosive.

Then a sequel would be in Order.

Many of the stories on this site are very well written...this isn't one of them.

WHAT A FOOLISHNESS!The cock's scent and taste AREN'T NASTY AT ALL FOR A WOMAN!On the contrary,they are the best for her sexual pleasure,MUCH BETTER THAN ANY SCENT OR TASTE OF A PUSSY!

this could have been so good, sadly only a three star