All Comments on 'Wraith'

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michael709michael709over 7 years ago
very interesting!

I almost get the feeling that you have played the game Evolve lol! This is a short story compared to your others but none the less you have managed to make it interesting! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Intriguing

Congratulations!

It´s far more difficult to create a "alien-monster" intercourse story than your other plots.

Please go on in this direction, too!

Thanks!!!

Mr_ShoggothMr_Shoggothabout 7 years ago
Nicely weird and sexy

There needs to be more 'cute' eldrich abominations on this website. Thank you, sir, for your efforts!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Monster stories like this one are rare, well-written ones even rarer. Hope to see more like this in the future! You seem to have a knack for this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What wait happen at the end?

This was actually increadbly hot I love to see more of this and she was that creature does next is it good? is it bad? So many questions that I hope one day get answered

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