All Comments on 'Who Seduced Who Ch. 02'

by YoungCub1992

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chytownchytownover 7 years ago
Hot Read****

Looking forward to future chapters, Thanks for sharing.

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 7 years ago
Providing a description of the characters is your option, but you could have actually "described" them without using a checklist.

Especially at the beginning of the page, it was kind of a JV move. Keep that in mind if/when you compose future stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Like

Really like this story, but one page at a time isn't cutting it. Instead of 6 or 7 chapters, how about 3 pages at a time for 3 or 4 chapters. In this 1 page chapter, you didn't really develop their second meeting. They haven't even fucked again yet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great chapter 1 and 2

I have enjoyed both Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. I hope young Austin gets addicted to older women and beds other neglected moms in your future stories.

RiaBella69RiaBella69over 7 years ago
Mmmmmm

Love love love!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Ready for next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
add more pages

I really love how this story is setup but add more development than the one-page chapters

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