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Hot Read****
Looking forward to future chapters, Thanks for sharing.
Providing a description of the characters is your option, but you could have actually "described" them without using a checklist.
Especially at the beginning of the page, it was kind of a JV move. Keep that in mind if/when you compose future stories.
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Really like this story, but one page at a time isn't cutting it. Instead of 6 or 7 chapters, how about 3 pages at a time for 3 or 4 chapters. In this 1 page chapter, you didn't really develop their second meeting. They haven't even fucked again yet!
Great chapter 1 and 2
I have enjoyed both Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. I hope young Austin gets addicted to older women and beds other neglected moms in your future stories.
Mmmmmm
Love love love!!!
Ready for next chapter
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