All Comments on 'Kiss Me Cate Pt. 06'

Thank You, another terrific story. Please write faster I can't wait to read Pt. 94.

It was very nice to find another fine part of the story.

So we have read 6 episodes.... when you find yourself looking for the next one each morning you know the story is something special

...but just one little observation, because you're being so careful about the language. You have Cate referring to "diapers" and being "spit up on." In every part of the English-speaking world, other than North America, they are called "nappies." And the past tense of "spit" is "spat." The way that you've written the character, I can't see Cate using Americanisms in that scenario.

However, that's not enough of a niggle to deter me from granting you the usual five stars!

Yesterday I wondered what had happened, five chapters in a row (one a day) and yesterday nothing ... I was worried if something had happened. Today I have seen that if anything happened, you was writing another longer and excellent chapter. I still think you writes especially for me (although I know it's certainly not). As indicated in another reader's comment, there was some words that confused me, but it was nothing really important or that made sense of this magnificent story. I think what is really important in this story is the fact that the feelings that both a man and a woman want to find in their partner, love, sincerity, respect, trust, even fear and doubts, especially if there had previously been a stormy relationship with another person. I really like the approach of the characters in this story, their lack of evil and their true passion (at least, until this moment). Few authors in Lit have managed to please me so much with the reading of their stories. I do not mean to disparage anyone, it's just that you write like I like it.

Waiting to read the next chapter asap.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet, and forever), is not my native language.

I am hooked and can't wait for the drama with the ex to ramp up,

Absolutely love the story. I just have this funny feeling about Samar, and the New Years' Eve party. We shall soon see.

I've seen some others worry about samar, please don't ruin it by having her sleep with him. Its too predictable. Also no more her getting assualted, she's been thru it twice

I have enjoyed this storie more than I can explain, you have a true gift in writing

chapter. it's going from very good to great. thanks for sharing. forget the other comments, let it go where it goes.

Looking forward to more.

I'm checking daily, where is the next chapter?

I've really enjoyed this story line. Please don't stop now!

Very nicely done - pacing, characters, tension around Cate's back story, very appealing! Looking forward to the next chapter(s) of this story - please don't keep us hanging...

Hi, I am reading all of your work so might be getting oversensitive to your default scenarios. In this section I realised that you have really overused the eyebrow wriggling to the point that all I can imagine is a pair of clowns gurning at each other. I really think that your work is good but you should maybe get an editor. This is getting into a bit of an overlong ramble, a bit of editing, pcroof reading and less eyebrow exercise would transform it into a gem as opposed to a rough diamond.

I've read 5 and 6. All very good, I'm hoping to see an additional chapter or so.

Liked the way you incorporated the maritimes in your story. Puts a smile on while reading. on to PT07

What to say? A story that has caused a tear or two for me, in happy and thoughtful way of course. Of coarse I'm giving up a few man points admitting that. After losing a wife of 40 years 2 years ago I'm getting bit emotional on the two year anniversary this month of my lose. Good story and don't listen to some of the inane criticisms.

i swear anon accounts pick some of the dumbest shit to complain about. who cares how many times the author says "eyebrows wiggled" it does nothing to detract from the story what so ever.