Don't listen to these wankers! This story is HOT! Lots of sex with his best friends on his birthday. Then having sex with his Dad. I wish I was Scott. I know there are many errors but the fact that you took the time to write a story and submit it is a huge effort and you have my respect. Now look beyond these comments, read your story, see where your mistakes are and get back to writing the next chapter. I wants to see what happens between his friends and his Dad. Keep up the great job! Don't let anyone stop you from writing. Aloha!
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Anonymous12/01/16
Wow
I think this was really fucking hot... I definitely managed to cum over it, who cares about the technicalities dude writing hot scenes is defo something you're good at, keep it up
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Anonymous12/04/16
Really good
I liked it really excited me an would read future stories of this please right more of this please😊😊
English
You guys, are you for real!
Don't listen to these wankers! This story is HOT! Lots of sex with his best friends on his birthday. Then having sex with his Dad. I wish I was Scott. I know there are many errors but the fact that you took the time to write a story and submit it is a huge effort and you have my respect. Now look beyond these comments, read your story, see where your mistakes are and get back to writing the next chapter. I wants to see what happens between his friends and his Dad. Keep up the great job! Don't let anyone stop you from writing. Aloha!
Wow
I think this was really fucking hot... I definitely managed to cum over it, who cares about the technicalities dude writing hot scenes is defo something you're good at, keep it up
Really good
I liked it really excited me an would read future stories of this please right more of this please😊😊
Wow
Loved it. It made we so wet!
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