OK , after BigGuy33 got roasted , what about this POS
Seriously , this was one of the most over the top racist stories that I made the mistake of actually reading !
This is truly awful. No redeeming qualities at all.
There is not doubt in my mind that this story reflects potential true life possibilities.
I am not sure that I would have put up with the details given here, but then I am fifty years out of date like many of the other commentators.
Why did they reconcile? This marriage was dead for a long time! 1 - the wife during separation let out all her slutiness, fucking bareback any man that approached her, showing no respect for her husband, because that time he had to fuck her with protection. When unprotected and if he failed to cum outside, she would kneed him in the nuts? After all she did during their separation, dancing she did what she did with the best man, in front of everybody? It doesn't matter the race od the best man, but her dancing attitude! 2nd - the husband would never again trust in her! He would always fear that she was fucking around behind his back! so he was very happy that she had had a miscarried, because the child wasn't his and that was also a little punishment for her! After the miscarriage it was easy for him to say that he would accept her, even if the baby was black...So again the question that turns this story in a bad one: "How could they have reconciled at all? 1*
What the hell was that? It seemed like an excuse to ask, repeatedly, do you get off on the idea of white women having sex with black men. There is a category designed exclusively for this. Put it there.
The story seems to have no purpose other than to explore the potential of his wife having had sex with black men while they were separated. For instance why is the best man black, there is no explanation that they were friends and obviously not from high school. As others have pointed out, there is a lot of detail missing that would give background and context.
simple and complicated. Racism exists. Stories will be written where the writer may not be a racist, but one or more of his characters is. We can read and write stories about cheating and not be a cheater. We can read about murders and not be able to harm anyone in real life. Yet, these loving wives stories where the husband reacts differently because the wife's lover is black make me uncomfortable.
Yes, there are many white men that would be more upset if their wife had an affair with a black man. Yes, there are many cuckolds and wife sharing guys that get even more jollies out of a black guy hammering their white wife. Is that racism? It gets confusing because I recognize the evils of racism of any kind, yet recognize that fantasies are not evil, usually.
The fact that the writer mentions the color of a character would indicate there is a purpose for it. Often it is meant to be more humiliating, painful, and disrespectful. That would seem to be racist. Maybe the color adjectives should be tossed out of the language?
I also recognize the fact that different people have different fantasies and fears, and they can write about them. Where in hell does that leave me as a reader, or a writer? I strongly endorse the right for anyone to write what the hell they choose to write. But are these fantasies racist, or just fantasies? I have found some stories with inter-racial themes to be quite erotic. Many people at least consider sex with people of other races in their fantasies and it gets them juiced. If I fantasize about black women, am I racist? Or does it have to be a negative fantasy to be racist? Sometimes I worry that we are perceived as racist if we mention the color of anyone's skin for any reason, since it really should not matter. If I could get my hands on Halle Berry, the only race would be to the finish line. Does that make me a bad guy? I like to think it's normal, as she is a beautiful woman, not a beautiful "black" woman. A person is defined by many things far more interesting and important than the color of their skin. None of us had any control over the circumstances that led to our conception and birth, so how can we be praised or hated for it? We can control how we interact with others, or at least we should have that ability.
Got a little wordy, but adequately conveyed the husband's angst over her activities during their trial separation. Get's a little cucky re her pregnancy, most men would not accept the child unless it was their DNA. His response to that dilemma was reasonable though.
I am not sure what Impo and Syndey read or skimmed over, cause the reason he reconciled is clearly outlined, he felt it was his duty and honorable. They clearly agreed to see others during the separation, so any disagreement over that is off the table. His reasons for agreeing to that are clearly outlined as well in two or three paragraphs.
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And the reason for the black best man is clear, the god daughter is marrying a black man! Come on folks, read the whole story before commenting.
This is a very good intro to a possible serial story, exploring wife's lust for others during separation (with husbands OK), her becoming world-wise during the process, and bringing the experience she gained back to marital bed. So many ways this could go....
Why would he reconcile with her? She pushes him to use condoms while going bareback with others and when she gets pregnant by another (black or otherwise) she wants him back to be the sucker fake dad because;
1. she doesn't know who the father is as there were so many riding her bareback'
2. she knows who the father is and he has dumped her because he doesn't want the kid.
3. She is still seeing the father but wants the sucker to pay the freight of the other guy's kid.
She is disgusting to go bareback during the separation, not on the pill and disregarding STDs.
Dump her and get custody of his kids.
What whore. Like another comment or said, she wants her husband to use a condom while she goes bareback with who knows how many men, then is sorry she lost the bastard child. Then she knees Him in the balls because he isn't the perfect lover first time around after she's whore danced with every swinging dick in the wedding party.
My advice to him, start arranging your financials for the eventual divorce. This whore will want to eventual get more strange and request a 2nd separation. Then burn the skank.
I understoo why he felt that he should reconcile: "he felt it was his duty and the honorable way"...I understand they had an agreement to see others during the separation...What I didn't understand was why he felt that he had to honor that agreement, when he found out that he had to fuck her with protection while her lovers did it unprotected, making her pregnant...That shows no respect for him. That's why I didn't understood the reconciliation.
Now about other comments that say this is a racist story: I don't agree. I see it as a story about people that are racists.
Sometimes a story is improved by giving the reader questions and then having them read to find the answers; this story asks the questions but doesn't provide the answers. Why did they separate, really? I suppose you answer that when she uses violence against him, or perhaps when it comes out that she required he use protection while having sex with her, but not the other men she dated, though we don't really know that; perhaps the protection failed?
So many unanswered questions and by the end, I didn't care anymore, and this was not a long story. The male lead isn't likable or relatable. Sure, I can understand his preference for being able to pass the child off as his own if he's going to reconcile, but I never really got why he reconciled in the first place? There's plenty of evidence in this story directly that she's abusive. Is that what you're trying to explore? A man so used to being in an abusive relationship that he'd tolerate that behavior, and blame himself for it?
The female lead isn't any more likeable. She IS abusive, neglectful and disrespectful.
This feels like a typical cuckhold story, in disguise, and given your other stories, it's obvious interracial sex is a fetish for you. Whatever fantasy you like. Unfortunately, it doesn't really make this a great story, nor is it particularly erotic.
I like to give supportive comments to writers, whether I appreciate the underlying fetish/fantasy, but this just doesn't seem like a good story.
There isn't really any tension, there isn't a conflict or choice that the character is going through. It is more some strange passive aggressive interracial fetish that is written from a nebbish, chronic insecurity perspective.
There is no real sense to the characters or behavior based on the situation you set up either with the estrangement or the reconciliation night.
Just not a very good story. Nothing there to redeem.
One of my main problems with wife was her previous lifestyle. She apparently had be careful not to impregnate her but was going bareback with multiple men and got pregnant. Is she going to be happy or just use husband and cheat?
It's a good enough story but I have never known a Man that could honestly reconcile with a wife that got pregnant by another hard-leg while trying to work out their problems during a "trial separation". Cheating is still cheating and if you are not divorced it is still cheating separated or not. I guess I am just old fashion in that I believe if you are going to commit to something, commit fully or don't commit at all. It seems to me that in this case this wife wasn't committed completely to the reconciliation or maybe I just do not understand their thinking. good story though.
English
OK , after BigGuy33 got roasted , what about this POS
Seriously , this was one of the most over the top racist stories that I made the mistake of actually reading !
This is truly awful. No redeeming qualities at all.
1 star
And yet another piece of shit for LW.
Intriguing
There is not doubt in my mind that this story reflects potential true life possibilities.
I am not sure that I would have put up with the details given here, but then I am fifty years out of date like many of the other commentators.
Why did they reconcile?
Why did they reconcile? This marriage was dead for a long time! 1 - the wife during separation let out all her slutiness, fucking bareback any man that approached her, showing no respect for her husband, because that time he had to fuck her with protection. When unprotected and if he failed to cum outside, she would kneed him in the nuts? After all she did during their separation, dancing she did what she did with the best man, in front of everybody? It doesn't matter the race od the best man, but her dancing attitude! 2nd - the husband would never again trust in her! He would always fear that she was fucking around behind his back! so he was very happy that she had had a miscarried, because the child wasn't his and that was also a little punishment for her! After the miscarriage it was easy for him to say that he would accept her, even if the baby was black...So again the question that turns this story in a bad one: "How could they have reconciled at all? 1*
WELL ? ?
Are you going to finish the story ? ? As yet , it has no point whatsoever------------
Has this become racist central?
What the hell was that? It seemed like an excuse to ask, repeatedly, do you get off on the idea of white women having sex with black men. There is a category designed exclusively for this. Put it there.
The story seems to have no purpose other than to explore the potential of his wife having had sex with black men while they were separated. For instance why is the best man black, there is no explanation that they were friends and obviously not from high school. As others have pointed out, there is a lot of detail missing that would give background and context.
damn sure
wouldnt have stayed married or raised a half breed
This racism thing is both
simple and complicated. Racism exists. Stories will be written where the writer may not be a racist, but one or more of his characters is. We can read and write stories about cheating and not be a cheater. We can read about murders and not be able to harm anyone in real life. Yet, these loving wives stories where the husband reacts differently because the wife's lover is black make me uncomfortable.
Yes, there are many white men that would be more upset if their wife had an affair with a black man. Yes, there are many cuckolds and wife sharing guys that get even more jollies out of a black guy hammering their white wife. Is that racism? It gets confusing because I recognize the evils of racism of any kind, yet recognize that fantasies are not evil, usually.
The fact that the writer mentions the color of a character would indicate there is a purpose for it. Often it is meant to be more humiliating, painful, and disrespectful. That would seem to be racist. Maybe the color adjectives should be tossed out of the language?
I also recognize the fact that different people have different fantasies and fears, and they can write about them. Where in hell does that leave me as a reader, or a writer? I strongly endorse the right for anyone to write what the hell they choose to write. But are these fantasies racist, or just fantasies? I have found some stories with inter-racial themes to be quite erotic. Many people at least consider sex with people of other races in their fantasies and it gets them juiced. If I fantasize about black women, am I racist? Or does it have to be a negative fantasy to be racist? Sometimes I worry that we are perceived as racist if we mention the color of anyone's skin for any reason, since it really should not matter. If I could get my hands on Halle Berry, the only race would be to the finish line. Does that make me a bad guy? I like to think it's normal, as she is a beautiful woman, not a beautiful "black" woman. A person is defined by many things far more interesting and important than the color of their skin. None of us had any control over the circumstances that led to our conception and birth, so how can we be praised or hated for it? We can control how we interact with others, or at least we should have that ability.
Quite good
Got a little wordy, but adequately conveyed the husband's angst over her activities during their trial separation. Get's a little cucky re her pregnancy, most men would not accept the child unless it was their DNA. His response to that dilemma was reasonable though.
I am not sure what Impo and Syndey read or skimmed over, cause the reason he reconciled is clearly outlined, he felt it was his duty and honorable. They clearly agreed to see others during the separation, so any disagreement over that is off the table. His reasons for agreeing to that are clearly outlined as well in two or three paragraphs.
.
And the reason for the black best man is clear, the god daughter is marrying a black man! Come on folks, read the whole story before commenting.
This is a very good intro to a possible serial story, exploring wife's lust for others during separation (with husbands OK), her becoming world-wise during the process, and bringing the experience she gained back to marital bed. So many ways this could go....
No reconciliation
Why would he reconcile with her? She pushes him to use condoms while going bareback with others and when she gets pregnant by another (black or otherwise) she wants him back to be the sucker fake dad because;
1. she doesn't know who the father is as there were so many riding her bareback'
2. she knows who the father is and he has dumped her because he doesn't want the kid.
3. She is still seeing the father but wants the sucker to pay the freight of the other guy's kid.
She is disgusting to go bareback during the separation, not on the pill and disregarding STDs.
Dump her and get custody of his kids.
Prepare for the inevitable divorce dude
What whore. Like another comment or said, she wants her husband to use a condom while she goes bareback with who knows how many men, then is sorry she lost the bastard child. Then she knees Him in the balls because he isn't the perfect lover first time around after she's whore danced with every swinging dick in the wedding party.
My advice to him, start arranging your financials for the eventual divorce. This whore will want to eventual get more strange and request a 2nd separation. Then burn the skank.
Not sure about this one, seemed to finish too soon
If there is a part two, I will give it another go. This was quite wordy & at times you needed to re-read. Perhaps the author needs a good editor. Ken
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I understoo why he felt that he should reconcile: "he felt it was his duty and the honorable way"...I understand they had an agreement to see others during the separation...What I didn't understand was why he felt that he had to honor that agreement, when he found out that he had to fuck her with protection while her lovers did it unprotected, making her pregnant...That shows no respect for him. That's why I didn't understood the reconciliation.
Now about other comments that say this is a racist story: I don't agree. I see it as a story about people that are racists.
Sorry...my comment was to @patille
My previous comment was to @patille...
Stilted and short
Sometimes a story is improved by giving the reader questions and then having them read to find the answers; this story asks the questions but doesn't provide the answers. Why did they separate, really? I suppose you answer that when she uses violence against him, or perhaps when it comes out that she required he use protection while having sex with her, but not the other men she dated, though we don't really know that; perhaps the protection failed?
So many unanswered questions and by the end, I didn't care anymore, and this was not a long story. The male lead isn't likable or relatable. Sure, I can understand his preference for being able to pass the child off as his own if he's going to reconcile, but I never really got why he reconciled in the first place? There's plenty of evidence in this story directly that she's abusive. Is that what you're trying to explore? A man so used to being in an abusive relationship that he'd tolerate that behavior, and blame himself for it?
The female lead isn't any more likeable. She IS abusive, neglectful and disrespectful.
This feels like a typical cuckhold story, in disguise, and given your other stories, it's obvious interracial sex is a fetish for you. Whatever fantasy you like. Unfortunately, it doesn't really make this a great story, nor is it particularly erotic.
I like to give supportive comments to writers, whether I appreciate the underlying fetish/fantasy, but this just doesn't seem like a good story.
There isn't really any tension, there isn't a conflict or choice that the character is going through. It is more some strange passive aggressive interracial fetish that is written from a nebbish, chronic insecurity perspective.
There is no real sense to the characters or behavior based on the situation you set up either with the estrangement or the reconciliation night.
Just not a very good story. Nothing there to redeem.
can understand
the low score
1*
I can understand why you don't give any information about yourself in your profile biography, I wouldn't want to be identified with this crap either.
Rebuilding
One of my main problems with wife was her previous lifestyle. She apparently had be careful not to impregnate her but was going bareback with multiple men and got pregnant. Is she going to be happy or just use husband and cheat?
BS
It's a good enough story but I have never known a Man that could honestly reconcile with a wife that got pregnant by another hard-leg while trying to work out their problems during a "trial separation". Cheating is still cheating and if you are not divorced it is still cheating separated or not. I guess I am just old fashion in that I believe if you are going to commit to something, commit fully or don't commit at all. It seems to me that in this case this wife wasn't committed completely to the reconciliation or maybe I just do not understand their thinking. good story though.
*** Strange couple, strange story.
The husbands ruminations were strange indeed. That kept me reading to the abrupt end.
??
Irrational story.
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