Kind of a nice story but needs some work. Charles says he was 18 and this was his first orgasm ever? And the idea of a group of straight 18 and 19 year old males masturbating in a group is unlikely. Both the first time and the "social masturbation" aspects just don't jibe with the age group. These distractions made it hard for me to get into the story, as did the lack of really describing his feelings...about finding a jack off group and about having his first orgasm while sucking his first cock. These major events had a lot of erotic potential but it wasn't developed. Try again with moire attention to how you felt.
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My friend Wes
Kind of a nice story but needs some work. Charles says he was 18 and this was his first orgasm ever? And the idea of a group of straight 18 and 19 year old males masturbating in a group is unlikely. Both the first time and the "social masturbation" aspects just don't jibe with the age group. These distractions made it hard for me to get into the story, as did the lack of really describing his feelings...about finding a jack off group and about having his first orgasm while sucking his first cock. These major events had a lot of erotic potential but it wasn't developed. Try again with moire attention to how you felt.
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