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I'm ready.
Got an extra chaise and longneck?
Spike!
Beach and beer. I'm on my way. Nice to see your words.
can't wait
till I can do this
Nice glimpse of summer
Thank you
Some wonderful summer images...
I love the beach and you took me there with this one... thanks.
jim : )
Light...
...and lovely. Excellent read and thoroughly enjoyable.
Sand
Don't see any dropped brain cells here, my friend. A piece of art. Looks like all the Lit. poets are joining you for a bonfire on the beach this weekend. You bring the long necks, I'll bring the Coppertone and the bikini.
Oh, and you'll have to put down that beer if you want to lotion this long neck.....
Kisses, d.s.
this is a really cool poem
Nice to read something different. Your poetry has a distinct voice.
As always ....
...I arrived late - but I loved this poem. The last verse alone is great. The use of "floats bye" is clever invoking something floating away.
A five!
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