All Comments on 'Prom Night'

Enjoyed the read.

But I felt it was a little too fast. Don't rush through it.

Would like to see more from this author.

I love Abby! Love to hear more about what she gets up to.

A story like this has to be longer, and especially if the victim ends up enjoying being forced there has to be more of a build up and a breaking down. But keep trying!

The story was well written but I was extremely disappointed. You rushed through it, and when the sex that everyone was waiting for arrived, it was rushed too.

i was very disappointed to realise that the story was over i would have loved a bit more detail... and to know just how interesting it got for the two of them .

It was a well written story however the sex was just to fast,hurried through. It needed to be built up alittle more and not wham bam. However it was a good read. Like to see more from the author.

you had her raped it was hot or sexy or erotic it was disgusting... my turn on got turned off

I liked this story. It moved along, and the prick-teasing bitch got what she deserved [and wanted!].

I think Greg should have f*cked her in the ass and then pulled out and pounded her in the ear. Also it would have been good if he had vomitted on her face and peed on her feet.

i loved the part where he became hard again after making abby suck their juices from his dripping fingers....and especailly when he unexpectedly grabbed her face and fucked it good mmmmmmmmm. It would have been extra hot to hear even more detail of his cum exploding hard (shot by shot) into her hot mouth ;)) Maybe he could tell her to lick him clean after too. (or he could trace his cock across her throat and wipe it clean on her nipples. yumm

I love this story. Imagining I'm the girl

Thoroughly enjoyed this piece keep up the good work.

... if you could call it "writing". Feeble effort to think that a cock teaser's mind would be twisted by rape after being kidnapped. Utter crap