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Not sure
about all you're saying but I like the rhythm amd visions you produce. Time to read again. Thanks.
My favorite posted today.
Damn good. I love all these metaphores-very well written.
your essense the blood
pulsing in tributaries tangled
within my hips
Wonderful lines. Thanks!
Wow
some great images here and excellent word choices.
" your body like the raging ocean
liquid and salty in a heated deluge
thrashes my naked core
into submission"
That is great
Really well done Blue
: )
Thank you
interesting title
and some beautiful words to accompany it. I would offer one tiny suggestion..drop the "a" near heated deluge...it picks up the rhythm a tiny bit. I really enjoyed this poem, thank you bluerains :)
Damn sensuous poem...
fragrance, taste and feel, this one touched them all. Well done.
jim : )
Love...
...this, blue. The language is beautifully chosen and handled. Extremely sensuous!
you have to love a poem that offers:
"sea siren scent in leathery lusty spice"
I've read that part several times.
The entire poem is wonderful but I just love your "sea siren scent in leathery lusty spice."
It was a pleasure just to type that out twice!:)
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