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by Anonymous

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by Syndra Lynn06/04/04

Not my choice

of authors, but I totally understand! A good book drags out all those folks. Clever word play.

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by bluerains06/04/04

also

liked your word play and the last line....blue

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by jthserra06/04/04

Very good... the music did bust out here

an interesting look into the music. And I have to love Joni. Well done.


jim : )

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by LeBroz12/10/06

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A full feast of the range of emotions
Let loose by minstrels just as they've settled down.

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