All Comments on 'By the Horns Ch. 04'

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As always, you've delivered :D

I have a particular fetish when it comes to big balls and inhumanely huge cocks (still, I love balls more :P) I can't help but wonder if you'd ever be willing to write a gay-type story? That would really get my engine going.

But anyway, this story was awesome, and I thank you!

Sincerely

-- A Kinky Fan

I won't say I'll NEVER write a gay story, but generally speaking, it just doesn't do anything for me. Maybe I'll write a story with a trap someday, but I dunno.

Still, glad you enjoyed it!

(Just voted (5 stars))

Was just wondering! But look forward to the possibility :D

-- A Kinky Fan

Gotta say I really enjoy your stories and would definitely read a "gay" story about a trap with the same themes, especially if illustrates a more feminine trap. The only negative criticism I have is some of the repeating themes I've noticed. Fresh at the top of my head for example is the reference of the cervix as "gates" and also "velvet walls". While both of those were very erotic they seemed to become slightly maudlin by the third chapter, but by that point the playfulness of the twins completely overshadowed it and rendered it to null effect. That's all I had I rate 5 hats out of 5 hats. Good read!

I do hope she shows up again. Excellent as always, 5/5.