All Comments on 'Snowfall Seduction'

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kriss4912kriss4912over 7 years ago
Well told

What a well written story and what a very luck boy Evan is to meet such a wonderful teacher and guide

hope there are more adventures for these two while the snow falls

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice story

Mmmm maybe she shod have naughty lingerie on in the next installment! Nicely written story!

WillieachesWillieachesover 7 years ago
Very Hot!!

I have read all of your stories. They are all hot!! Please don't stop writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot hot hot

As always, your writing is fantastic. Wish I could find myself a Heather

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good start.

More please.

JanetHarperJanetHarperover 7 years ago
Lucky guy

He got paid and got to have great sex. Very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Got me hard

OzBushrangerOzBushrangeralmost 7 years ago
Continuity Issues

I really enjoyed the story and it had its desired effect but it does require a bit of editing and correcting.

One thing I noticed was the sudden appearance of the butt plug in Evan's ass.

It might help to have someone else read your work before you press the 'publish' button.

liz33ndliz33ndover 5 years ago
great story

the wording was off a little for me, but I still loved the idea, and would love of it to happen with me. What guy wouldn't

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Where are you Heather?

hotrod6hotrod6about 1 year ago

Your stories are so erotic, they always make me wish I was there. I have known I am bi for over 50 years, I have loved crossdressers and trans gurls since I 1st met her back.the 70s

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