Thank you for your lovely comments. I will be continuing this in the near future with a couple more stories. Nothing planned just yet as I have other stories coming but stay tuned :-)
Than for the lovely romantic story, as they seek out their yearnings and gently offer them to each other. A senstive tale, written with much sensitivity
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Anonymous01/29/17
Very nice
You have a very gentle and sensitive writing style. I like it.
It was sometimes hard to follow, because I couldn't tell who "she" referred to at times. Probably using the protagonists names would have helped a lot. Still, great story, thanks for sharing it with us!
English
good story
I do hope there is more to come
Mmm very sweet.
lovely
you really should continue this it's very good!
A wonderful story!
A very well written story! I hope this was only the first chapter of this story... Thank you!
RE: Sequel requests!
Thank you for your lovely comments. I will be continuing this in the near future with a couple more stories. Nothing planned just yet as I have other stories coming but stay tuned :-)
delightful
Than for the lovely romantic story, as they seek out their yearnings and gently offer them to each other. A senstive tale, written with much sensitivity
Very nice
You have a very gentle and sensitive writing style. I like it.
Mmm sexy.
Nice. Very nice. The dynamics of this is going to be interesting
Sweet
This is not normally my genre. Yet I find myself going to it. Well done.
TBC
suprise
Loved your story-Well done and sexy
Loved it!
It was sometimes hard to follow, because I couldn't tell who "she" referred to at times. Probably using the protagonists names would have helped a lot. Still, great story, thanks for sharing it with us!
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