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The Waitress

byShaima32©
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by Anonymous

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by jenorma201212/05/16

good story

I do hope there is more to come

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by Anonymous12/05/16

Mmm very sweet.

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by Anonymous12/05/16

lovely

you really should continue this it's very good!

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by TSreader12/06/16

A wonderful story!

A very well written story! I hope this was only the first chapter of this story... Thank you!

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by Shaima3212/15/16

RE: Sequel requests!

Thank you for your lovely comments. I will be continuing this in the near future with a couple more stories. Nothing planned just yet as I have other stories coming but stay tuned :-)

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by woodseaves12/26/16

delightful

Than for the lovely romantic story, as they seek out their yearnings and gently offer them to each other. A senstive tale, written with much sensitivity

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by Anonymous01/29/17

Very nice

You have a very gentle and sensitive writing style. I like it.

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by Anonymous01/30/17

Mmm sexy.

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Nice. Very nice. The dynamics of this is going to be interesting

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by teddybearclub02/02/17

Sweet

This is not normally my genre. Yet I find myself going to it. Well done.
TBC

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by plumberdon02/07/17

suprise

Loved your story-Well done and sexy

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by HiddenInTheOpen02/19/17

Loved it!

It was sometimes hard to follow, because I couldn't tell who "she" referred to at times. Probably using the protagonists names would have helped a lot. Still, great story, thanks for sharing it with us!

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