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Very good
A nice twist of mystery. Will there be a second part? No, I don't think it needs any more.
Ugh.
You put this in Romance? Next time warn readers with a description of Bondage, Nonconsent, etc. Not everyone is into that crap.
What utter rubbish, FFS, if I read that's the spirit one more time I was going to scream, and also why the fuck are they trying for a baby after only having one date a week for 5 months? So here I am going to follow the link to your story and give it the 1* it probably deserves too.
ESL ?
English as a Second Language ? Or just shitty editing ?
1*
Why the Hell you posted this one in Romance.And Even though you should've warned about Bondage and Nonconsent. WTF completely ruined on the second page.
Supposed to have been a romance not rape and bondage.
Mea Culpa
My apologies for having put this story in Romance. I did not understand the acceptable parameters of the Romance rubric, and I naively thought this was a romance story, even if Melissa's back story is not at all pretty. I am sorry and I will try hard not to make such a mistake again. JBE
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