If only it came that easy...not believable...so, not very good.A267
Author, Cute story, predictable but nice, Enjoyed. Thank you. jntiques
No real justification as to how sex came about, which made everything after irrelevant and even ignoring that,very anti climatic .
Boring and mundane. Were you in a hurry/
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Yah, right.
If only it came that easy...not believable...so, not very good.A267
Author, Cute story, predictable but nice, Enjoyed. Thank you. jntiques
No real justification as to how sex came about, which made everything after irrelevant and even ignoring that,very anti climatic .
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Boring and mundane. Were you in a hurry/
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