Anya's Unusual Dream Ch. 08

Outstanding series!

This story is fantastic! I hope you consider revisiting these characters in the future (possible sequel?) The tease at the end shows how the possibilities are endless. Even if you decide not to this has been a great read and I look forward to revisiting it in the future. The high ratings from the readers are well deserved. I look forward to more of your well-written imaginative stories in the future. Thanks for sharing them with us. Statispro1

Please continue with the future you have set up

Interesting, but...

As far as I understand, you just sacrificed all planet Earth for sex crazed females. Think about it - if they can have each others babies and everyone is immortal, how fast the planet would be overpopulated? Few millennia to meet other space races? Sorry, in a setting like this they don't have even a half millenia. They all would starve to death. And this is only a GOOD ending.
BAD ending - national security agencies would identify them and hunt them in a matter of few weeks max. Those poor women are OTHER species now and they're endangering humanity. Do you really believe people would watch this and do nothing? No. The changed ones (or infected) would be captured, quarantined, examined and in worst case scenario, they would spend the rest of eternity in a high security zoo, like exotic animals.
If you REALLY want to conquer the entire planet by changing its' inhabitants, you need geniuses with high level strategy. Are these girls geniuses? I don't know, because you didn't developed their characters enough. But epilogue part shows me, that none of them thought about "infecting" military or political people first (if ya wish to conquer a country, start from its' military and information centers). No, I found them frolicking on a school grounds, witch is a height of stupidity in their situation. That's why the BAD ending is more plausible.

About a story as whole - it isn't bad. Actually, you have a gift depicting hot and steamy sex scenes. However, you're too fast with your storytelling, jumping in to sex almost from the start. Sex scenes are too long and in the long run they becomes too predictable/repetitive/boring. For example, I skipped almost all sex scenes in last two chapters, looking for interesting plot. And found out, that you do not like writing plot at all. The same with your characters. They are too similar to each other. And as I said, you just sacrificed the entire planet :) Or at least - your poor characters.
Till next time.

Wow....

Ummm hey Aurimaz....I think you're taking this wayyyy too seriously. It's just an erotic story. It doesn't have to be a masterpiece. It isn't intended to be realistic by the author whatsoever and that should be extremely obvious to you. There isn't a ton of character development or even a lot of thought into the plot and it's quick to get into sexual action. It's short and to the point, a good quick story to get you ready to jizz. It doesn't pretend to be much more than that and I like that occasionally.

Absolutely Incredible

Hands down one of my favorite series so far! I would absolutely LOVE to see a few more epilogue chapters detailing their adventures.