All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Clips vs Mags

Glocks have Magazines. Some rifles have clips which feel bullets into their internal magazines. Someone on the street would screw that up, but not someone who just passed the type of class Elsa and Cindy just passed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story!

I really enjoy this story and have been following it since the beginning. Great work, keep it up.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...