Snow Storm and the Babysitter

This really did not come through as a "true story", but rather had several hallmarks found in many male wet fantasies, (9 inch dick, the virgin taking the lead in front of a much older man and hungrilyi asking for dick without any hesitation or unsecurity etc). So rather than getting excited by the story, I in stead got agonized over you having no moral standing but without any hesitation cheating on your wife and yor daughter's mother - not only once "by accident ", but bragging over an on-going affair.

Hah. The above comment says it all. You just got knocked the F*CK out man!

Legal Field

I would expect better use of language, from legal field, or maybe you should proof read for grammar etc. As others have pointed out, typical male fantasy but maybe put yourself in a role you can pull off.

Hmmmm

Frankly a bit pathetic and amateurish