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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2206/06/04

That...

...voice you are searching for in your poetry is beginning to make itself be heard more and more, a voice that says, "it's me...this is what I have to say, and I know how to say it......listen!" . Good for you, lostandfounder!

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by Syndra Lynn06/06/04

Worship

me beneath the moon. Nice poem!

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by quietpoly06/23/04

lovely

Pure thoughts.

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by twelveoone06/23/04

Nice and clean

use of words, really isn't 100, but I rounded up
no real faults, phrases could be a little better
better people than me liked it,
but I'm not a woman

so you know your audience - points for that

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