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Forced First Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/10/04

This truth

is horribly hotter than any fiction :)

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by Anonymous06/10/04

Interesting Story

I read both chapters and have mixed emotions. It is good that you can take an event that happened early in your life that was traumatic and write about it and do it in an erotic way. I do hope that you are a peace with "it" as you appear to. Actually look forward to the next chapters.

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by Anonymous06/11/04

Very Hot!

wow. that is hot! it reminds me of a few girls i did it that 2..eheh heh

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by Anonymous08/24/06

What Rot Gets Written...

Who could actually believe that a woman, especially a YOUNG woman who's first sexual encounter encompassed a physical to her boyfriend and a vicious rape to her would grow to LIKE a life, replete with constant reminders of the same? My daughter didn't.
Marie was raped in much the same manner, and has been a basket case ever since. We caught the animals; they don't seem to have "checked in" with anyone lately. Gee whiz, can't think what could possibly have happened. But between Marie's boyfriend's family and our family, one can only conjecture...Long vacation, maybe?
Marie has a recurrent "woman problem" as a result of her rapist's having an STD. And we made SURE that Marie got the "morning after" pill. We wouldn't want any "issue of rape" wandering around in diapers. Such an animal as the rapist could only beget another animal. And I would rather see such a demon-seed killed off ASAP, rather than allow it to live.
If there any morons out there who think that this is a "good stroke story", let me say that stories like this only serve to inflame borderline psychotics who then ideate that such acts will get them a "White Oomun". Think twice.
Or you might wind up in a world of trouble. Like the "brothers". You know; the animals that almost killed my daughter. Oh; and author, start using some "artistic responsibility" instead of "artistic license". No one, and I MEAN NO ONE has the right to advocate raping females, no matter what their color, for the purposes of engendering some sick fantasy "relationship".
All in all, I found your story fatuous and stupid.

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by KOLKORE08/24/06

My advice to previous poster

Stay away from titles which suggest “forced” ANYTHING…
To the substance, post your comment on the portal, I skimmed and agreed with all your comments.

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by Anonymous05/03/09

Ran this through "Gender Genie"...

...and it says it was written by a male. So much for "true story".

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by Anonymous02/12/11

Okay stories, but not very realistic

Your Forced First stories here are okay to read, but not terribly realistic, though you claim they are real. First of all, regardless of the rape, I highly doubt the Indian boyfriend in the first chapter is going to allow himself to be viciously beaten by a black thug without calling the cops for himself even if he does not care about the girl. Sure, you were raped, outside, in public, in the middle of a giant block party, with people all over, and nobody saw a thing. Funny how in chapter 1 you had no idea who this black rapist guy was, but by chapter 2 you know exactly where he lives and who he is.

So, you are deathly afraid of your dad finding out you were raped and conceiving a baby by that, but you are not afraid of continuing to have unprotected sex with the black rapist and having a baby. So, you are a high school graduate, but you have no fear or understanding of sexually transmitted diseases by either a rapist or consensual sex with a stranger. If you were really raped, then you would want a health and safety examination even if you did not want to go after the scum bag rapist and you would have at least told your mom. Though, if you told your dad you were really raped, you would not have much to worry about as any guy would go out and get the rapist first even if he was a bit mad at you for being a tease and your Indian boyfriend for being a wimp (that black guy would have to pray the cops got him before I did in your scenario or else he would just be dead).

I really do not get what it is about you white chicks lusting for black guys (black girls do not lust for white guys near as much) except that it is nasty and dirty (the whole big black cock thing is generally a myth any way). So, you are deathly afraid of the whole street psychically knowing you were raped, but you had no fear of all of them watching you go into the black guy's house with him groping you. Sure you are going to start a sexual relationship with your rapist whose name you do not even know (though some how you know exactly what house he lives in and when to catch him alone in that house) when you would not let your caring and loving former boyfriend have sex with you. In summary, nice try on the stories, but work harder of the truth and realism if you want to claim them to be real stories because the plot holes are too easy to point out in these Forced First stories.

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by AMHJ8909/22/13

Interesting

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by Anonymous11/20/14

love slutty white women that are easy. Its so nasty and hot that you let blacks have your body. They can get you to say what ever they want. call yourself names and let them treat you like they were treated as slaves. I looked for a white woman to marry so I could watch.I would help them abuse you and turn you.

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