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Too slow
I have read this author and this story ain't as good as his others.
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Well
Since the wife set them up. I would think there would be more time for them.
With the wife's Approval. So father's Day Mother's Day Easter,Thanksgiving,Christmas,etc.
i know of a situation just as described
but not deer hunting. it was duck hunting. one male, two females. no duck hunting but all got quacked....Fact 5
Great premise and great story.
Great premise and great story. Please continue.
Really , a mans fantasy, only a dream.
So if you believe his wife set up this horney friend to fuck her husband , so he can enjoy his new sex partner as she lost the desire for sex. One. She is one hell of a wife 2. The friend is some kind of sex animal. 3. If you believe that will happen ,quess again. But a nice story anyway.
Brings back memories
A little different situation for me, she brought in a girl friend for Christmas to try and save our relationship. It didn't work, but it was a HELL of a lot of fun.
Let's see
"Her new ex was a class A jerk that wanted to play the field when he was out of town," so she hooks up with a class A jerk that plays the field when he's out of town? He had no idea that his wife approved when he fucked her the first two or three times. That makes him a cheating class A jerk. If he had known ahead of time, things would have been different. As it stands, he's the same sort of piece of shit her ex was.
I agree with one of the comments
She divorced a cheater and then goes and fuckd another? As the comment says when he fucked her he didn't know nothing about the letter! So he cheated! He even begged her to keep it all a secret! What a faithful man she has chosen to make her forget her cheating ex-husband!
Idiotic slut crap!!! MINUS 5*!!
He is a cheater she is a slut and now what??? A man who cheats on his long term wife isnt first choice!! And why should a wife mortify herself with that scum husband!! You think its generous or its love to allowed your lifepartner to cheat with your best friend!! Its only idiotic and displays that he has no respect to her!!!
So why delay giving him the note? Is this a celebration of cheating?
The loving and loyal thing to do would be to give him the note as soon as they arrived, so he could better appreciate the gift and choose to accept it, or not. A lot to consider, like would he give his wife the same gift if the circumstances were reversed? Could this be the wife's attempt to make up for her past undisclosed adultery? Why does the wife think he might divorce her over her normal biological limitations? How can anyone be sure this will be a one-time event? Then there's the whole pregnancy and emotional attachment issues.
The whole scenario comes off kind of juvenile and disrespectful. Maybe better put in Erotic Couplings or something since there really is no wife involved in the sex.
To all the other anonys out there criticizing the story.
Was it well written? Was it erotic? Did it involve a loving wife? I think that the answer to all three questions is yes. So quit your moralistic whining, and if you're so moral, why are you reading stories on this site anyway?
loved it
hot story
thanks
I enjoyed it.
4*
Cute and entertaining
5* worth in my humble opinion!
Very Amusing
If the genders were reversed this would rate 1.5 and the commentators would be baying for blood. What a gaggle of hypocrites.
Decent story
I like it as it was a change of pace. Getting laid with the wife's blessing is every guys dream I guess. It just annoyed me that he was so resistant to it after the first time. In addition, why did she have sex with him multiple times before giving him the letter from his wife. Why make him go through the agony? I would have been pissed about that. She should have teased him like crazy and then give him the letter.
Anyway, how about those zealots. The world is so full of morons I just constantly smh. They go to a site for perverts and fully read perverted stories, and then tell us all how horrible we all are, lol. Can you imagine being that screwed in the head? If you want to read sweet little stories where everything works out, go to Disney. If it says "erotica", then it contains adults and adult sex. If you have a hard time with adult sex stories, just don't read them!
Well written, but...
...I'm really not so comfortable with the plot. Yes, he had permission, but he didn't know it at the time. Clearly, he cheated. Chrystal knew he had permission, but didn't tell him. Instead, she practically forces him to cheat. Does she harbor resentment against all married couples, or is it just this particular one? Sorry, I just can't like these folks.
Predictable, but Sweet
The blind on the acreage was much more effective than the 'surprise twist' blind!
4* for sweet!
What a wife
He's a stronger man than me. Than again I'm nude whenever on my own!
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