I would say an interesting theme is emerging. It involves insensitive, superficial, selfish men on the one hand and women yearning for affection on the other.
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Anonymous12/10/16
Very good
Dragging it out though. Still no reveal of Gerry's gigantic cunt-sticker.
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Anonymous12/10/16
It was a good day in LW
Then you and xleglover tried to fuck it up. You're not funny, sexy or entertaining, just boring.
Have a decent premise, but the jump from never sharing or swinging to a hosting a key party seems unrealistic. Then the wife has second thoughts, but after three chapters we dont know how big Gerry's dick is. It is prob a monster, thus he was able to snag Sandra (along with the $$$). Just get to it.
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Anonymous12/11/16
seems like filler
Not enough happens in this chapter, story-wise or sex-wise
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Please add part 4. Gerry is great with his mouth maybe he is great with a big cock. And more with Donna as well.
Interesting Theme
I would say an interesting theme is emerging. It involves insensitive, superficial, selfish men on the one hand and women yearning for affection on the other.
Very good
Dragging it out though. Still no reveal of Gerry's gigantic cunt-sticker.
It was a good day in LW
Then you and xleglover tried to fuck it up. You're not funny, sexy or entertaining, just boring.
Great stuff
Can't wait for part 4
Really dragging this out.
Have a decent premise, but the jump from never sharing or swinging to a hosting a key party seems unrealistic. Then the wife has second thoughts, but after three chapters we dont know how big Gerry's dick is. It is prob a monster, thus he was able to snag Sandra (along with the $$$). Just get to it.
seems like filler
Not enough happens in this chapter, story-wise or sex-wise
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