I am very impressed with the quality of your submissions. Well written, fully formed characters with good explorations of their motivations and lacking the general weaknesses of much of the work here on Lit.
And better than most I've read here. I'd love to read another chapter or two to see where the ladies take their relationship, perhaps realizing deep feelings for each other. Thank you for sharing!
I love a surprise, and I was so happy to see this little side story. Wonderful well written text as always.
Great job.
Please consider writing more.
Doc
Love your writing style and the way you build the story. Very very erotic you need to continue this story want more. Would love for the two to show back at the diner and the three get together.
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Anonymous12/15/16
Slow down please
Firstly, I'm really impressed with your writing. Your stories are great, the premise excellent. Can I ask please slow down. In both this story and cheat days, I feel you moved too quickly from "straight" to "gay". I think there is so much material available related to the mental, emotional, ethical turmoil being confronted by the situation at hand.
Now that's just me. I couldn't write a story of any kind to save my life but I love reading yours.
Please keep it up.
I'd love to see a final instalment of Cheat Days where Mal has to deal with those issues I mention above.
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Very yummy!
Such a very yummy start, I hope this continues! Thank you!
Very nice work.
I am very impressed with the quality of your submissions. Well written, fully formed characters with good explorations of their motivations and lacking the general weaknesses of much of the work here on Lit.
Nicely done.
It was alright.
Great story
Seriously hot, and enough backstory that the character details and build up really set it apart from a lot of roommate lesbian stories.
Great story
Better than the average by far
Stunning!!
You are a very gifted erotic author.
VERY HOT!
Better than 99% of what Ive read.
Thank you xoxoxoxoxo
Very well done!
And better than most I've read here. I'd love to read another chapter or two to see where the ladies take their relationship, perhaps realizing deep feelings for each other. Thank you for sharing!
Loved it !!
Made me so wet ;)
Yep...
...I'm wet, too!
Very sexy story...
...need I say more? Oh...5 stars! ;)
Again. Yes. Please...
And put that strap on to good use too. Please. Again....
Connection
You definitely need to tell us if the girls from cheat day come back to the restaurant. That would make everything go full circle!!!- great stories!
Another great one!
I love a surprise, and I was so happy to see this little side story. Wonderful well written text as always.
Great job.
Please consider writing more.
Doc
Love your work
Please write more
Outstanding
Love your writing style and the way you build the story. Very very erotic you need to continue this story want more. Would love for the two to show back at the diner and the three get together.
Slow down please
Firstly, I'm really impressed with your writing. Your stories are great, the premise excellent. Can I ask please slow down. In both this story and cheat days, I feel you moved too quickly from "straight" to "gay". I think there is so much material available related to the mental, emotional, ethical turmoil being confronted by the situation at hand.
Now that's just me. I couldn't write a story of any kind to save my life but I love reading yours.
Please keep it up.
I'd love to see a final instalment of Cheat Days where Mal has to deal with those issues I mention above.
Loved this little gem. The pacing were a little too fast for my usual taste, but wow loved it and your style of writings anyway.
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