Very hot, I enjoyed it greatly :) Can't wait for part two
So much that's erotic is the way both people feel and this danced around the emotions surrounding the lust nicely. Great read and looking forward to seeing Chapter 2.
Thank you for your comments! The feedback is much appreciated! :)
Can't wait to see where they take this in Chapter 2!
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Very hot, I enjoyed it greatly :)
Can't wait for part two
Really nice concept!
So much that's erotic is the way both people feel and this danced around the emotions surrounding the lust nicely. Great read and looking forward to seeing Chapter 2.
Thanks!
Thank you for your comments! The feedback is much appreciated! :)
nice
Can't wait to see where they take this in Chapter 2!
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