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by jthserra06/06/04

An interesting pilgrimage...

Into hedonism and back. I liked the superman vs. man images as he guiltily shrank back into reality. very good.


jim : )

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by normal jean06/06/04

damn!

what an insight into a man's mind. I absolutely love this Darkmaas, wonderful...mere humanity my butt...love, LOVE that line

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by tarablackwood2206/06/04

Terrific...

....poetry, handled with confident expertise. Very impressive!

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by 06/06/04

My kind of poem.

One that vividly paints the scene in few words and grasps the reader by his/her imagination.....and it doesn't hurt a bit!

Five.

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by tungtied2u06/06/04

Somebody give me a hankie,,,

then I'll decide where I can use it most! Terse, tight, powerful

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