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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata06/06/04

I wanted to

just leave the comment " OK"
: )

Hot stuff..seems to be going around these days.
Full of fire and passion...just like it's author
Thank you

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by doormouse06/06/04

Oh Geez...

I want your... I need your... his... the guy next to you... the guy leaning against the lamp post... shit I just need LOL

HOT!!!!!!!!

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by tarablackwood2206/06/04

Very hot...

and very well-written. Fine imagery and pace. Great read!... and who care argue with the title!

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by flyguy6906/06/04

I'm ready!

Would you like it in a box?
Would you like it wearing socks?
Would you like it commitment-free?
Would you like it with me?

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by Syndra Lynn06/06/04

You fucking go girl!

Drunk and naked on the lawn! no wonder I love you. This is great!

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by 06/06/04

Merci...

Need a cold shower after reading that! ;) Great pharasing in this one:

I like hot sex
in blue rooms cool
like ice cream churned
on a winter afternoon

Reminds me of last summer, much enjoyed...

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by 06/06/04

I agree....

...this is steamy! but I'd drop the word "glock". For me it grates in an, otherwise, smooth piece.

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by WickedEve06/08/04

I have to agree about the glock

it's too plop, thud, plock.
so stop breathing on that glock.

:)

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by Anonymous06/09/04

glock?

cock, nothing sexier than a man with a gun and a woman so close
so close
so close, ohhhh
to that gun


yeah, change it sugar!!

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by BlueskyBeauty07/26/04

i'm hungry now...

i think i need something ..uhmm oh neva mind!

i need to get laid! lol

hot hot hot!

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by Anonymous12/04/06

^

Who could say no to that? Besides you said (among other things) please.

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by sexysmile07/16/08

Very nice

Utterly relatable, which I loved! Excellent.

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by sassynyc09/09/08

~

that first stanza is pure heaven!
you have an incredible rhythm going throughout. i'm glad i found this, albeit 2 yrs late. :)

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by OT06/28/09

Very cool

I liked it much! just real! OT.

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