All Comments on 'The Smirk'

Thanks for sharing.

you know what i dislike about stories like this is the people saying i am so badass becouze .... i am freaking tough and i dont take shit..... you know a real badass would just do he deems neceserry and doesen spoud all that nonsence about i hit a kid in the mouth. pff pissant character

try not to embarrass his life. TK U MLJ LV NV

As I grew up, never fought did not have to. There were tougher kids around but not smarter, no one messed with me because I would talk them out of fighting. Life is good when you can look down on everyone else even teachers, I was in the know.

That whole convoluted nice guy finds a whore with social disease was like yuck. But the part about the smirk galvanizing the whole process. I feel that. By the way ...getting a black belt is no big deal. In terms of being a serious martial artist, that rank is like graduating from the eighth grade . The Bruce Lee Proficiency takes another 10 years minimum. Not personally any kind of martial arts whiz myself but am aquainted with worthy people who are serious about that area.

The author seemed to be very aware about toughguy blowback , but to me the narrator aquitted himself on the balance like a career-minded person who doesn't want to wind up in jail or halfway house with a bunch of cretins for the sake of immediate payback. My favorite part was Susan's reaction to change of venue mass email to family. Nicely played.

Touchy subject adultery AND retribution. Oh yeahhh. LOATH dog owners who let their large dogs off their property that snap at innocent passerbys. I carry a heavy staff as a walking stick and have nearly brained some untrained curs , then cursed out the owners with the same vehemence their 75 pound plus fur babies that they middle linebacker blitzed me moments ago.

Very immature, but I was bitten as a kid by one of Cujo's mid- sized cousins and that brush with deja vu doesn't bring out the best in a person. The next time I'll do a little better. It's a process. Much like this story that goaded quite thoughtfully,considering this venue. I thank the author for sharing.

You are rapidly becoming one of my favorite posting authors on this site , I usually know that I will enjoy your posts.

A anon who signs as Cog said in a comment on a recent story that a lot of authors posting on this site think that writing a consequences story is " too easy " , as though its now beneath them to write such a storyline ( although some of these same authors have written them in the past ).

I guess there really is a pendulum effect , because it seems to have swung back to the earliest days of this site , when most of the stories were just stupid stroke stories about wife sharing and voyeurism . I just hope when that pendulum swings back , their will still be readers left that will enjoy them.

As todays offerings in this category prove , twelve stories posted , and after checking that tags , this is the only one I'm going to read.

If I wanted to read simple stroke stories , their are other sites who allow a lot more leeway than Lit , hell for that matter just watch free porn , the internet is full of it.

I , like I can only assume a lot of others come here because the Lit is in front of the erotica for a reason. I enjoy a storyline that may have some graphic sex written in , but not always the main focus. Yes I like my Literature to have a healthy dose of erotica , but also have some drama , some angst , some melancholy moments , and sometimes to have some literary ( gasp ) justice rendered unto fictional characters in a (gasp) fictional story !

Rant over.

Thank you B&K for sharing this wonderful little yarn.

5 *'s

The cheating wife got off too easy. Being Sicilian myself I know you just went by the movies you've seen. You do not really know. Still a five star tale because the revenge was decent.

There is nothing wrong with wanting to wipe a smirk off someone's face. There is something wrong with lacking self control and the intelligence to respond appropriately to a situation. Women are just as responsible as men for their behavior. There are NO excuses, there are just choices and decisions we make. Those decisions DEFINE who we really are. An adulterer by definition does not care about (love) their spouse. Hard as it may be for some people, the only solution to this is DIVORCE. A marriage with a cheater will never be the same. The expectations will never be met. A person may stay in the marriage for other reasons, such as providing a stable if not happy home for children until they reach adulthood. If there are no children, then divorce is a must. A must because the last thing in your life you want to do is to mate with a cheater, share children with them, and have the cheating, piece of shit pull their crap and hurt your children - all when you knew better to start with. You will be kicking yourself for the rest of your life.

The simple fact is that people who cheat are shit. They are useless for anything in life of importance. They can't be trusted by the one person in the world that should be able to trust them. They are routinely denied security clearances because if your spouse can't trust you - the government can't either.

A good story from @BillandKate...A good reading and one moral: It's always good to have a uncle called Vin! 4*

You come to a sex site but write no sex, just how you hate women.Morals, anyone that comes here has no morals so lets not worry about morals..Please

What demon? What did the character actually do? I saw him learn about the payback from his uncle after it happend. So what was his payback? I just don't get it, I must be dumb. Thank you for writing, I enjoyed reading it.

I was asked to help a neighbor two houses down from us.....seems he has served 3 tours in Iraq and had no heat when he got back to the states this last time. We own a small refrigeration company and i'm not well versed in residential heat pumps but i'd try to help him out but he had this massive rottweiler that obviously didn't care for me. He thought it was funny when the bastard growled at me in their hallway while I was checking out the closet unit so I picked up one of those screwdrivers ,that is more a pry bar than anything, when I went to the van for a part. The damn dog growled at me again when I came inside and this guy had a smirk on his face like his dog was all badass, so I pulled this crowbar out of my shoulder toolpouch, flipped it round one handed and crowned the bastard right across the bridge of his nose with the handle.....pretty hard. The young man looked pissed that i'd hit his dog as his dog slinked away and I gave him a choice of not getting his heat running for the night or leaving me alone. He slinked away like his damn dog till I fixed his heat. The fucker couldn't control his animal so I had to do it for him.

Other than that little tidbit.......the story was good, payback was appropriate and the cheating bastard got his comeuppance. Nuff said.

This is more akin to real life where you can't go all macho on the dirt bags without suffering repercussions. Subtle and sneaky really do work and more importantly, it gives you the satisfaction of getting your revenge on the bastard(s). If you have an Uncle Vin, even better.

Oh yeah, on here dozens and dozens of times.

Nothing original nor interesting about this tale.

“But at the time I was being a selfish bitch, wanting it all.” – But how does get it “all” by cheating? How does that get her to be a stay-at-home wife?

"Don't worry; never has been my thing." – It doesn’t matter if it’s “your thing” or not; you must have asked at least once since she “never let you back there,” so she’s giving him something she never gave you.

“I was still in love with Jacob and was hoping you would fight for your wife” – The same old story; if you have to fight for your wife, she’s not much of a wife! SHE’S the one who should have fought for THEM by telling the creep to go to Hell!

Well written good characters. The only thing that would have made it better is if he would have seen the ex wife and looked at her and shook his head. Probably would have made her feel even more like shit! Either way I am sure she will pay over and over again! Especially since you hinted your character finds someone else to live a good or better life. "Revenge is best served cold" and "Revenge is best served by living a better life" - letting them see it / know it is even better!

I was going to give a 4 star but your final paragraph about the dog made it a five. I appreciate you giving the inspiration for the story - no not kicking the shit out of a dog that is barking at you does NOT make you less of a man. I assume you have been around dogs and could tell it was a warning bark not I am going to attack you! Plus being calm and cool telling the dog to sit. Good use of your head in a situation that could have gone bad.

Please keep writing and I will keep reading

But I think the greater retribution for the wife would have been to allow her to remain in the marriage to the slimeball. He actually rescued her from a marriage that could have resulted in greater tragedy later on.

but there wasn't much to it. I was middle of the road so I gave it a middle of the road score.

It is only sweet when the people you get it on know where it came from.

I liked it! 5* Actually the revenge was better than killing her (which shows no imagination in a literotica story and is highly unlikely in real life).

The plot was good but it never took hold of me. It was way to matter of fact. I did this then I did this. Then this happened. Hi emotion.

Was she trying to punish herself? She says he is worthless in bed. Everyone knows he is an asshole. I guess she didn't think she deserved better after what she did. I hope her parents didn't pay for the wedding. I would think they would have shunned them both when they announced their intentions. Sam was an idiot.

that the main character didn't commit any crime. If all the details became known, the police couldn't charge him with anything. In a lot of these stories the husband could be arrested if it happened in real life. I'm not a lawyer, but the fact that the filming was done in the whore's room with her consent, and in a room the husband paid for would make it dificult to prosecute. After all, the whore could claim the filming was for her protection. There was no blackmail and the film was turned over to the guy (and his wife).

Love the revenge aspect of cheating.

...unless the victim realizes exactly why all this crap has suddenly fallen upon his head.

Your plot periodically gets lost and jumps around characters and time. You have almost no emotion in your story. You talk of the character being emotional but its only talk no actual, shown emotion. Applies to husband and spouse.

As ScorpioJJ pointed out, given what she told him, there was no reason for her to marry Jacob. And as others pointed out, yeah, Jacob was a slime ball, but she's the one who cheated on hm. Okay, she's not with John but she pretty much got off scot-free.

<P>

And then... nothing.

When I realized this is another shit story in which the husband beats up the boyfriend but leaves the person who actually betrayed him unscathed.

It would make a good story. Our hero does a good job of getting revenge but I agree

that should be something that tells the villain who did him.

While I cannot speak for what it is like to be cheated on, I can comment on betrayal. When I have been betrayed, after the shock is over the next thoughts are: how could they do this to me? (I have never been able to answer what would cause a person to dishonor themselves) What did I do to deserve this? (Nothing, except be in the way of something that the other person wanted more than our relationship) What should I do? (This is the tough one, but in each and every case I determined that the best thing I could do was to cut my ties with the betrayer as quickly and least expensively as possible. That was it. Take it as a loss, just the way you would if it was a business relationship gone bad. There is more bad press and ill will to be gained by counter attacking. In fact, what I have found is that the word would spread and the betrayers enemies would seek me out. They would mostly want inside information on the betrayer and they would use that information to get even for their own grievances. The satisfaction I got was knowing that with little effort of my own, justice was done to some degree. Life is about living, loving, and having a good time. Living with a cheater or seeking revenge on a cheater is not what life is about. Let the cheaters live long and miserable lives of regret and self pity.

I'm like you, I know how hard it is to control the demon that lurks below. It gets easier with age and wisdom. Plus the love and understanding of a good woman. I really like your work here!

Thanks.

A real man would have talked with his wife especially after she realized her mistake. A real man would have given her a second chance. He acted like a coward and ran home without his toys.

Thanks. I did note that when she talked with him she told him that she'd let the lover fuck her in the ass twice, something she'd never let him have because she said his cock was too big. It was stated in a manner that she was apparently complementing his large cock. I don't think that the author meant that exchange to be humorous, but I found it to be under the circumstances. Wow, what a backhanded complement, and doubtful to make him feel better.

Served the perp and the ex right - they got what they deserved. I like the non-BTB clever revenge stories, and this one fits. Five stars.

hey @Mbgdallas, that's called being a castrated cuck.

not bad at all

Hiking in the woods without a stout walking staff is like riding in a car without seat belts. No, you'll actually use the walking staff regardless of emergencies. I recommend a Cold Steel City Stick for in town, and a Chinese bowstaff for hiking, one with a steel spike covered by a removable covered tip. An unleashed dog in the woods is a hazard, and its owners need to understand that they are actually endangering the dog's life when they allow their pet loose from their control. Shame to kill a good dog owned by stupid people.

The story was actually kind of cool and unemotional. It didn't feel like he had lost much of a wife. Beautiful, maybe, but worthless as a marriage partner. That she remarried a cheating asshole just proves what a stupid shallow woman he chose for a wife. He should send her a thank you card for saving his children from being spawned by a dimwit.

Thanks for the effort, but you need more practice. And a bigger stick. I know, that's what She said.

Fuck me man! I wish there was more B.T.B. Honestly if anyone smirks at me! Make peace with GOD! STORY IS GOOD BUT NOT GREAT I AM GIVING YOU TOP AWARDS BECAUSE OF SHOCK AND AWE, Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE. Merry Christmas everyone and a happy gonorrhoea

One asked why would she marry the guy she cheated with. Some I know on both sides of that situation say it helps her feel she's not as bad a cheating slut because she was really into the guy but deep down that's just an excuse for acting like s cheating pig. Why would any guy arrogant or not marry a girl who was cheating on her husband. That only leaves her capable for doing it again

A smirk? Horse shit. Since when did a smirk hurt anybody?

You got the divorce, and then agreed on the night before the final split to meet one last time. Now me I'm an RAAC guy. That last meeting I would have parleyed into a first new date. The only concern was if she'd been seeing Jacob during the separation. I suppose my first question wouldn't have been why, but are you seeing Jacob. If she said yes I would have dropped a Franklin on the table and walked off, but if she said no then I would have begun to reconsider my choices. I wouldn't be in any hurry, take a couple years and see if she has it in her. Then if I did remarry there would have been a nice prenup.

Alas a couple comments said you weren't original. My God! These stories are like old westerns. How many ways can you slice an infidelity tale?

And oh yeah, the STD thing was stupid and probably incredibly illegal.

Now keep writing! You're fun to read.

Jedd Clampett (carvohi)

I enjoyed it.

Oh yeah! What about I LOVE THE SMELL OF NAPALM IN THE MORNING! Story is Fantastic loved it! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

He doesn't understand the meaning of a smirk from a guy who is fucking his wife, lol! It means than your are wimp who enjoys having other men fuck your wife.

It was almost without passion. Even the details on what the company did were pretty minimal. My biggest question was about Sam and why she would continue to see a guy she knew to be a player, who was a mediocre lover, and had no respect for her or their workplace.

A Smirk, a wink, a little smile can and will get the shit knocked out of you at the right time. Assholes most times think the are getting away scott free but, when the hammer drops they loose the Smirk. Your character showed a lot of self control to wait for the horn dog to go back to his low life ways. I can understand having respect for the family of the cheater if they had the wool pulled over their eyes too. The mothers are hurt as bad as the cheated person, how can someone she raised be a lowdown cheater.

The women with the dog running free in the woods got off easy they would be scraping that mutt off a tree or removing some other objects from the dogs body. Dogs and boots usually the boot wins or a rock the ASPCA won't defend that kind of stupidity those women showed.

I'm not as controlled as I should be and sometimes get myself into hot water because of the way I sometimes react to certain situations.

Why would she continue to date and even become engaged to a lowlife? After she was smooth talked out of her panties then caught by her Ex what could she do! She had to stay on the broken ship because she was misguided By her pride.

She gave up her self respect, her family's respect, her friends respect and her employers respect she committed her self to that course.

She probably wanted to go back but, maybe she was lying about the bad sex with Harris. She did things for him she didn't do for her Ex. She had the nerve to say it to his face.

He did good to give her get clap too! To bad his uncle liked her she should have been found beaten in an alley too!

The hookers said anything bad about his abilities in bed. Unless the story needs to make that point clear about if Harris was good or bad. Never the less Sam was a lying cheat and you don't believe cheats when their actions are different from what they are saying.

a part of me wanted him to kick Jacob's ass 3 times around the globe. The problem is exactly what the author said, jail is not a fun place.You can also be sued in civil court.

I like the story although I think it could have used a little more emotion.

Liked the Story. and the Struggle he had keeping himself in control. Like others I would have liked him to Smash ass holes face. But Jail is not worth it. and he was on his way Career wise. so to do what he did set A-Hole up with the Clap was a great way to get at him ,Her and who ever else he was with.

I liked that he was a thinker. He learned from previous previous experiences not to act or react toooo fast. Something was said that's important to me "he didn't worry about what people he didn't know though about him " that's a good lesson.

I like stories with cool thinker! Sometimes I can put up with a hotheaded thinker. The operative word thinker.

Take your pick. He did some things that a "Thinker" would do and some things a "Wimp" would do.

Torchthebitch forever!

Wonderful story ! Also I totally understand the dog thing . I carry a small .380 while hiking . It would have been tempting to put a bullet in the ground between his feet , then smirk at the smirker.

Jacob thinks he "must have something wrong with my equipment since Sam was so easy to get in his sack when we were married.” – If Jacob think there’s anything wrong with his “equipment,” ask her why she never gave John her ass!

Splendid author but...like Stephen King novel's on the last 20 pages ....the ending is questionable.

Women are bitches, like the dogs they own. Me, I would have pulled out the 22 pistol I carry on walks and shot the damn dog as a preceived threat.

She loved him so much she cheated on him. Then according to her she loved him so much she wanted him back. She wanted a family with him. Then she proved how much she loved John by getting married to the man-whore right after the divorce.

John's decision to move on was definitely the right one.

" Some of mine end with reconciliation, some with a burn, but you won't read about a wimpy cuckold"

You have no word.

because annnony hated it!!

The comment at the end, about the dog, and the bitch's smirk? You should have shot the dog, that probably would have wiped the smirk off her face. And before all you PETA loving assholes start, I'll say this. I like dogs as well as the next guy but when a big dog like a Rottweiler attacks a person, unprovoked, the dog should be put down. And the sooner the better. 5 stars for the story.

very entertaining and all in a quick read that told a story about what can go wrong .i liked it .thankyou for your time and effort .lonerider10

Your story is very good, I liked the way you got revenge. You showed heart by not doing anything which could directly hurt her family.

To hell with the haters it's your stories and they are free, what are they bitching about.

I'd sort of like to know what happened to Sam. Part of me wants her to be somewhat happy, but missing what she had. The more vindictive side wants her to be alone and lonely.

you should know its not about self control and the only reason you did not speak up at that moment was becouze you were scared of the dog

i think about evry action i make and the only reason i do not kill like 25% of the worlds population who just dont deserver to live becouze there are bad for the world is its against the law

and it aint against the law to defend your self so you should have just told the stop smirking you complete waste of a human ore something like that.

if she send the dog kill it becouze then you are allowed

and yes it is pretty easy to kill a dog it will jump ad you so stick your arm out let him bite your arm get your legs around his neck and break it or just shoot it

and there problem solved with never loosing control or calm

so it is not about self control the fact proberly is that your just a coward

i hate that you guys alll use national sterio types

you know the sterio type about sicilians is just left over from when the italian mob was still powerfull it ment to not fuck with the italian mob and since most of those guys are sicilians.... and now they dont have any say in anything so that saying has passed like the italian mob

same with the irish they got there reputation becouze britain pissed on them and shit on them for so long that they stood up for them selfs and started fighting and the world was astonished that they became mad and bit back thats where that saying started

so as you can see that anoying sterio typing just shows the total lack of knowledge couze you guys never use them right

and if you you guys realy must sterio type here is one that is correct like 80% of the time and that is arogant americans

anyone else. It means that they have a little secret that you are too stupid to know about and it is the manifestation of their satisfaction and disrespect. As I have gotten older I have become less tolerant of this kind of thing rather than more tolerant with age. There have been times when, if I hadn't been able to get a grip on myself, I would have gone to jail for murder. Someone can laugh at me and outright taunt me and not light me up as quickly. That being said, I can understand the mindset of your character and I applaud the way you created him. 5 stars and well deserved in my book. Not killing the guy didn't make him a wimp and the guy getting trashed by the "family" didn't upset me that much either. Sometimes bad shit happens to bad people. Too bad the wife didn't fall down a hole in something. As for the real life woman with the Rotti, maybe she fell down a hole after they walked off.

pappy

The Paragraph above. I think you are right. I have a Lady Friend who has owned a Rottweiler and a Doberman and would have Never put up with that from either of them.

You know, that woman could have brf (bitchy resting face*) and the smirk was just her normal face.

* https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3v98CPXNiSk

Really stupid.

Wife marries lover who she says can't satisfy her and broke up her marriage. Not at all possible. Especially since she didn't love him.

Husbands action are stupid and self serving.

My opinion was that his wife felt his work was more important than her and that he didn't really love her. That she did it to get him to show his love and fight for her. He didn't just tucked his dick between his legs and ran ran away.

She was right about his love for her.

Husband was the asshat in this story.

Consider using spellcheck. Alternatively, go back and finish 5th grade. Hopefully, the little ones will not not mock you too badly. All of your critiques are poorly worded, grossly misspelled and full of misconceptions and prejudice. Or you could stop writing. You will not be missed. (I do not generally get involved with flame wars, but you really stand out as a complete prat)

boring story, ridiculous revenge, ugly writing. needs lot of editing.

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please no references to Literotica. They completely kill the mood of the story.

"Don't wait up John, it's been a while since I had a girls' night out." - So it's been a while since she had a girls' out. What does that have to do with him waiting up or not?

This is the first story of yours I've read and I like your style. No wasted words and the plot never wandered. Most of the characters were interesting including the mercenary whore and the connected uncle. Not sure what's bothering the trolls....Thanks for sharing your work with us.

Forget about the Cocksmokers that are whining about this or that with your story. It was decently written, had a good plot, had a little morality thing going for it and some suitable and very comical Revenge aspects.

The Whiners about it are mad it didn't have a full blown Cuck aspect lickin' the Man Lemonade out of the woman like they are forced to do.

I enjoyed it. It wasn't the best I have read and it by far wasn't the worst. I would rate it a 3.6 but we can only do Full Stars so I will give you a 4 which is mostly the highest I give for stories. I have only given out a few 5 stars in probably over 500 stories I have read on here.

People don't understand the beauty in an awesome Revenge Plot that works out. I didn't for many years. I always thought the best Revenge was kickin' the shit out of some Twat Waffle I felt wronged me.

Sure it felt good for awhile and he hurt for awhile but once his booboo's healed, the pain for him OR her was essentially over. Whereas a good mindfuck can last for months, years, or, God Willing, Decades.

When I first experienced the ability to Fuck with someone that lasted for so long that they had to have Professional Counseling, I became addicted to it and decided to help many others exact revenge on those that have messed with them. These days I don't do much of that anymore, but over the years, I have probably helped 200 or so friends, relatives, friends and relatives of all of them and a few strangers here and there.

Granted, there weren't many I couldn't take in a fight for many years, but like I said, that feeling of knowing you really scrambled someone's brain and life up for a very long period of time is addicting.

The part about the dogs? doesn't make any sense. The rest is excellent

Carvohi's comments have once again demonstrated that he has a low IQ. The weasel who fucked the diseased whore was not forced to do it. He did of his own free will. Anyone who picks up women in a bar stands a good chance of picking up an STD. He lucky that it wasn't a permanent STD like Herpes or HPV.

The jerk would be one hundred percent immune to STDs by keeping it in his pants. He deserved what he got.

"And yes I know, my ratings will suffer because of the paragraph above, I'll get the usual rants of how I should have done something, but my manhood has never been based on what people who mean nothing to me think."

As far as I am concerned, I don't think your ratings should suffer at all. If there were more of us the world would be a better place, and hopefully less violent.

J

Would be totally embarrassed by your wimpy actions. Have to keep your demons buried- yeah, right. Good to have an uncle Vin. Tell him about the dog lady smirk; he'll take care of it.

Love stories based on reality, and authors who tell us that.

It would have been too good for them ;)

I enjoyed your last paragraphs!

Shitty people are everywhere, and hide behind the creature comforts of a society forged in blood and sacrifice. Then they have the sheer stupid smug to look down on hot-blooded people that live by respect earned and not given. I find them to be the most disrespectful and soft.

Our demons MAKE us. Maybe we fear them at first. But it's not your 'turn the other cheek' society that will save you in a pinch, it'll be your demons. They have your back, it's that self respect that builds a society out of a nomadic animals. We make friends with our demons, and they no longer seem scary.

Like that story very much. Good simple biological revenge, with a nice beating for Jacob. Don't mess with Sicily.

Good read..

It held together. It made sense. He's a devious SOB, but I think I like him.

I' have let the infections fester

The husband's revenge is different and interesting.

Billy Lines

Keep them coming. I also enjoyed the reason for the story. Too bad so many people lack common sense. 20% of the population has hemeroids, the other 80% are a-holes...

"He adores you Jelly, don't ever cheat on him."

"Why would I do that John? I love that man and we're going to have a little boy soon. I'm not crazy."

"That's what I would have said about Samantha a year ago. Look at us now, six days from a divorce."

"Sam got stupid John. I'm not near that dumb."

Re: Dialog

Thank you - it's always nice to get a comment like yours.

Unique revenge.

What's not to like? 5*

You've given me an idea for a story - thank you. There will be no plagiarism or copying but there will be a smirk! Sorry, as I've said before I don't post here and have a different handle elsewhere.

You characters are talking like LE characters not like real people:

"We did John, but the reasons for my actions are all old clichés. We'd been together and exclusive for seven years. I was seduced by a good looking guy in the workplace who complimented me on anything and everything. You were spending more and more time thinking about or being at work."

What is that? A character that reads LE LW stories way too often?

Or:

"Well, that's a good thing John because your dick doesn't belong in a woman's ass."

Where are the women that talk like this in public? In Arkansas trailer parks?

If she is so unhappy with new lover's sexual performance then why she was going on through divorce? If the husband is so much better why not trying to save the marriage?

Another cliche of LE:

"Another problem was Samantha is a beautiful woman; one of those drop-dead babes that never learned to be a bitch when men flirt with her. "

Yes, always super-beautiful women in these stories. Albeit the ones that talk like Arkansas trailer park trash.

This character was an epic douche. Never cross a Sicilian with a demonic temper lurking inside them, or they'll quietly walk away from every confrontation. But then! Sometimes they hire a prostitute to infect you with an STD, and send letters to your wife and employer behind your back. This dude was SOOOO BADASS!

Needs a sequel where he follows the guy home, and then inspects his property and reports any illegal extensions to the local city council. What a fucking dweeb.

Calm organised revenge. Jolly well played that man!

A round of applause for the protagonist for the clap his wife's lover got!

I ‘score’ LE stories based upon the quality of the writing - not upon what occurs in the story - so, here, the ‘5’ is for your well written story. The ‘word’ I wish to add *is* about what occurs in the story... it troubles me to have the cheating spouse reveal that the person they cheated with was a choice of convenience and ‘just sex’ or ‘not making love, but a fun/different fuck,’ or recognized to be an opportunistic seducer - AND THEN MARRIES the non-romantic clown. That consequence just doesn’t make sense.

Just wanted to make that comment.

Cheers,

JMAS

A wife that marries a little dick turd she cheated on her loving husband with must have had loving feelings for him and deserves to be "punished" also, even if Uncle Vic had to do it. She did the ultimate smirk and walks with a shot of penicillin. Not the Sicilian way, man!