this is one of the best stories on this site, the love and compassion of one woman who changed the lives of a mother and daughter is by far the best thing I hope this story wins the winter contest
This was a very sweet story, but it lacked any real personality. It was like a fairy tale, with all the clichés, and a lesbian context. Not an enjoyable read
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Anonymous12/11/16
very sweet story
this story was different from most on this site but really of the festive moment. some times though I found it a little twee but what would Christmas be without a little twee.
the erotica was there at the end but maybe only leaving it to the last 10 % was a bit too short maybe 50 50 is better suited for this site
English
outstanding
this is one of the best stories on this site, the love and compassion of one woman who changed the lives of a mother and daughter is by far the best thing I hope this story wins the winter contest
Cute but lacking in character
This was a very sweet story, but it lacked any real personality. It was like a fairy tale, with all the clichés, and a lesbian context. Not an enjoyable read
very sweet story
this story was different from most on this site but really of the festive moment. some times though I found it a little twee but what would Christmas be without a little twee.
the erotica was there at the end but maybe only leaving it to the last 10 % was a bit too short maybe 50 50 is better suited for this site
A Good Story
This is a good story with lots of romance and little sex, but a very enjoyable read. Keep it up.
What a wonderful love story!! I absolutely loved it. Please keep writing!!
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