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outstanding
this is one of the best stories on this site, the love and compassion of one woman who changed the lives of a mother and daughter is by far the best thing I hope this story wins the winter contest
Cute but lacking in character
This was a very sweet story, but it lacked any real personality. It was like a fairy tale, with all the clichés, and a lesbian context. Not an enjoyable read
very sweet story
this story was different from most on this site but really of the festive moment. some times though I found it a little twee but what would Christmas be without a little twee.
the erotica was there at the end but maybe only leaving it to the last 10 % was a bit too short maybe 50 50 is better suited for this site
A Good Story
This is a good story with lots of romance and little sex, but a very enjoyable read. Keep it up.
What a wonderful love story!! I absolutely loved it. Please keep writing!!
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