by SteffiOlsen
I love your stories! The characters are always so complicated and well thought out. I'm interested to see what Argus' and Nivid's relationship is really like...something spooky is going on there! And of course the naughty scenes are always great. You definitely have quite the imagination! Keep up the good work!
You've got some unexpected things happening here, and I need more of it!
Even more mysteries. I'm seriously interested in this brotherly dynamic. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I was happy to find this, I'd missed the first chapter so I went back and read it first. Interesting characters and intriguing situation. I look forward to more.
TWO WEEKS!?!?!? WHAT THE FUCK AM I SUPPOSED TO DO FOR FOURTEEN DAYS!?!?!? how will I get my answers?!!! What's with argus' fugue state? How did this curse come to be !?!? Can it be broken!?!? Nivid!!!!! Sooooo many questions!!! Hurry up!!! 5 stars!...
Dude, HURRY UP... away from my very special friend... far away... need this to sustain me! New underwear! laundry detergent, electricity and water! you owe it all to me because of this literary crack you're writing!!! pleeeeez to hurrry up!
I am hooked on this story!! Your writing... Oh your writing!!! It is one of the best writing styles I have come across!!! This story is absolutely wonderful, it is formatted incredibly well. Bravo! I cannot wait for further chapters.
First time i'm reading this type of story, i'm very intrigued and excited to read more of this, keep it up! :)
U need to upload a new chapter soon.. you have run out of your said gap. We enjoy the story line. Please don't keep us waiting for much longer
Tuesday morning-- hopefully it will be live by Friday or Saturday. Life got in the way this month, but I should be back to a more regular posting schedule now. THANK YOU again for the comments-- Anon is awesome this month!! --Stefanie
..... combined with your exceptionally skilled writing leaves your readers pleading for more. As tried to say in chapter 1 comment (mistakenly placed at your great TLB story end), am not yet totally into the beast aspects of the story, but knowing your other works fully expect to be -- and am already taken by her character, one of your most absorbing.