All Comments on 'Son Comes Home Early'

The premise is right but you need to edit the story.

The mix of perspectives - mother / son - is confusing and typos and poor sentence construction takes away from what should be an erotic situation

Totally unbelievable. I had to read and re-read sentences to try and make sense out of them but I don't know why I bothered.

Too many Incest Rape stories around ! Couldn't read it all. You should love your family not Rape them

Own that shit. Ending was too abrupt though. ***

No. NOT homosexuals. LOL

Anatomical "waste" is spelled "WAIST"

Anatomical "whole" is spelled "HOLE"

VERY distracting when you use the wrong HOMO-PHONES!!!!

Very good story...but a bit short...I did not notice the typos until those 40-something losers who still live in their parents attic/basement had mentioned it. But hey...I suppose those losers need something to distract from their sad and very pathetic lives.....:((((((((.

You came out of her whole?

Needs resolution on many levels;

Why was father/husband neglecting wife?

Once that is explained, how do mom & son move forward?

You got home early and caught mom about to cheat. Then, you basically raped her! Then it was story over. As soon as you entered her, you should've started negotiating with her! No other men, just you. And sex anytime. Outward appearance, a loving son taking care of his mother, while dad's away from home. At home, mom gets the intimacy she needs, while you get the sex that you want! Both of you win!

Moc, don't mind the trolls. They pop up whenever they figure they can whack somebody from hiding. It's destructive criticism. And do watch "homophones". And which pronouns are "subjects" and "objects".

Excellent story!

As i said, my cup of tea!

As i was reading your story, images of me & my naked mom were popping up in my mind...

... images of the two of us making love (which never happened in real life but was regularly taking place in my jack-off fantasies... & in my wet dreams!)

I lusted after my mom.

I loved my mom platonically.

I loved my mom romantically.

I now realize that i was under my mom's spell at the time.

If now believe that at the time, i had an Oedipus Complex of sorts (not the strictly Freudian one, though.)9

Liked it when he comes home catches his mom cheating. Then decides to shove his cock up her cunt. Let's all his cum shoot inside her I hope he got his mom pregnant too. I know my mom stands 5'4in weighs 150lbs with natural 44dd tits and hairy cunt and ass her hair stands out 2in between her legs. Took advantage of her by pushing her on back on couch got on top of her shove my cock in her cunt and she screamed out loud your fucking big just kept fucking her until let my cum blast her cunt. Then 2 weeks come around told me she was pregnant I just took her bent over couch arm rammed my cock in cunt and she said not again I kept fucking her until she said now baby born time for me to get fixed which she and we still fuck each other

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This story needs more part's to it, please write some more. :)

This story has a lot of life left in it how about some more chapters?

well I would hope dad made no effort to feel like a woman! NICE at least son raped the cheating whore.

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Didn't catch mom cheating but overheard a phone call about impotence and her being "so horny I could climb the walls". When she came out of her room I didn't hide the hard on she so desired.

Lost me with the piercings.

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Keepin' it 'All in the Family'!

11/10!!!!!

Uhhh… rape much? ;)

Ever notice how these start with non-sexual occurrences interrupted by a description of how hot the person they’ve never thought about sexually is?

Go back to school and learn how to spell 4 letter words

I've never been a fan of rape.

Little confusing with the constant change if POV and pretty close to rape. But still 4*

This should have been put in non concent however it shouldn't have even been allowed on the site for it was pretty much rape and while I have seen some idiots on this site that has commented on how good stories are when there not but I have also seen them same readers draw the line on stories that are pretty much rape stories to the writer a little word of advice if you want to make it and have people read your stories leave the rape shit out cause no 1 wants to read about rape this could have been decent if you would have 1 not allowed the son too be so easily impressed and or forgiving by the way she explained it to him and 2 made it a non erotica story and 3 this goes without saying leaving the rape shit out anyone man who fucking rapes a woman is no man and deserves to have his dick cut off and anyone who promotes rape and shit like this story is no better

Ok well I would say I'm surprised about some people actually liking this story but unfortunately I'm not for I have seen a lot of comments from guys that said they liked the story that just makes me wanna repeat what I said in my last comment those people are no fucking better than the person who who done the raping I'm glad that I will never meet them cause I'll more than likely end up in jail for cutting there dicks off after I torture them to the brink of death more than once