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A opportunity missed
The premise is right but you need to edit the story.
The mix of perspectives - mother / son - is confusing and typos and poor sentence construction takes away from what should be an erotic situation
An awful story
Totally unbelievable. I had to read and re-read sentences to try and make sense out of them but I don't know why I bothered.
Rapist !!
Too many Incest Rape stories around ! Couldn't read it all. You should love your family not Rape them
Take that whores pussy
Own that shit. Ending was too abrupt though. ***
Homophones
No. NOT homosexuals. LOL
Anatomical "waste" is spelled "WAIST"
Anatomical "whole" is spelled "HOLE"
VERY distracting when you use the wrong HOMO-PHONES!!!!
Hello losers...no typos here...jump off a bridge.
Very good story...but a bit short...I did not notice the typos until those 40-something losers who still live in their parents attic/basement had mentioned it. But hey...I suppose those losers need something to distract from their sad and very pathetic lives.....:((((((((.
Whole vs hole
You came out of her whole?
crying out for part two
Needs resolution on many levels;
Why was father/husband neglecting wife?
Once that is explained, how do mom & son move forward?
Great start
You got home early and caught mom about to cheat. Then, you basically raped her! Then it was story over. As soon as you entered her, you should've started negotiating with her! No other men, just you. And sex anytime. Outward appearance, a loving son taking care of his mother, while dad's away from home. At home, mom gets the intimacy she needs, while you get the sex that you want! Both of you win!
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Moc, don't mind the trolls. They pop up whenever they figure they can whack somebody from hiding. It's destructive criticism. And do watch "homophones". And which pronouns are "subjects" and "objects".
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