I Caught My Wife Cheating

My Susan would love your story

Those are things she likes to do, and I love her so much that I let her. We have good times together! Nothing is off the menu! I don't consider it cheating because it's O.K. with me. And I don't care what you others think of this story or our lives!

Must be fag day

All cucky fag storied today I see

'shuttering', it's SHUDDERING. I gave up there. Painful to read.

Buy Me A Drone

I think I'd pimp my wife out if it meant I could buy a drone.

At least the shite was very short.

This will get the sissified cucks of the site little peepees hard and have them creaming in their frilly knickers

Yuck

What's with all the cuck authors & stories on LW at present. Must be the Donald Trump effect. This was just so so bad. Please LCIP do us all a favour & don't publish anything else. 1 *

missing a bit

regardless of whether i liked the topic or not i think this could use some technical enhancements. interesting premise and family kink but you didn't explore its origins. had he ever been interested in a cream pie before? had he ever done it for his wife? had she ever expressed an interest in water sports? was their sex life fulfilling in the past?

needs more 'filling'.

to many monkeys with keyboards now days
this was bad from the start and only got worse

I think you got a good start but

for me left too many holes... I suggest you attempt a re write and take some of the comments to improve your presentation 3

For this kind of story this was incomplete...

For this kind of story this was incomplete...We don't know nothing about any of the characters! For instance the lover: was he a one night stand she had met? He must be a long time lover to ask her to go live with him! So why a long time lover would only be abusive that night? The wife: was she a promiscous slut before she married, and when alone she returned to her slut days, like suffering from "Dissociative Identity Disorder (Multiple Personality Disorder)"? The husband: Has he always been like that, and being that reason he had chosen a slut like her to marry? 1*

Idiotic cuck shit!!! MINUS 5*!!!

I love her so much.... what an idiotic opinion!!! You love a people and that people can do all things to you without repercussions??!! Are you insane or an idiot??!! Maybe you are the real cuckold/wimp like your protagonist!!!

Category

Impo was right that you omitted too much, even for a flash story. Also, the ws aspect really makes this fetish when the cuck aspect is factored in--his sexual excitement at his wife's infidelity. Also, you did not account for the aftermath of Sam, who had been invited in by wifey being naked outside and wifey having been slapped--what, that evens things off?

What a beautiful and romantic way to end this story!

This writer should seize the opportunity to write a book: "1001 ways to be romantic to your loved one". Just in this short story he showed 3 or 4 of those 1001 ways.

A nice 1.

You earned it.

GOOD FOR A FIRST TRY!

I commend you for having the nerve to post on LW. I'm sure you have read these stories before and know what kind of reaction to expect. While the story you told isn't my cup of tea, you did a fair job of telling it. I strongly suggest you proofread more and you try another category if you are going to delve in the male characters liking the taste of cum and/or water sports. I suspect most who read LW will find these things disgusting and your scores will be low.

It probably won't affect the comments too much, since lately many of those who comment have an agenda which doesn't require them reading the story to have an opinion.

I didn't assign a score, I'd be too biased against the story line.

Wow

One of if not the best first time short stories I have ever read, anywhere.
Yes, you will get the detractors; who nit-pick at everything.
Disregard them at all costs and keep writing.

3 by accident

Was supposed to be 1*. This is disgusting. Come on folks, eating another man's cum is so stupid only a moron would do it. The diseases! Please why would anyone think it is sexy? It is gross!

Nothing says I love you...

...like pissing down your woman's throat. Gross.

Also, can any writer on LW come up with a more original plot device than, "I came home early from a business trip"?

PAYBACK IS A BITCH OR A PISS SWALLOWER

and a cuck is hatched. TK U MLJ LV NV

Had me until....

Pissing down her throat ... absolutely disgusting

Fetish

Resubmit in Fetish. Readers there may like your story, drinking someones piss is just GROSS

1*

cuck shit.

I'd Like More Revenge

But what you wrote is fine. I don't understand his feelings, but I can accept them. Nothing here disgusted me at all. Maybe this is her way of trying to make things right.

cheating

" but I slept with another man" she lied, she was't sleeping just fucking, sleep never entered her brain.

It's A Read***

Thanks for writing.

Cuckold

Hate this type shit.

God, how I hate shit like this

If you are going to write a fucking cuckold story then do it but let the reader know so those of us who don't like this crap don't waste our time reading half a story before realizing what it is, even when it is a short story!

Best solution

Kill the wanna be writer

Haters : This is NOT a cuckold story.

For this to be a cuckold story then both the wife and her lover would get a thrill out of humiliating the husband. Does that happen in this story. Hell No.

First the wife defended her husband to the point of almost getting beaten up herself. Secondly, the other guy could not humiliate the husband as he himself was humiliated to the point of urinating on himself. Does this sound like a cuckold story?

This is a voyeur story. The husband likes seeing the wife fucking worthless guys the fucking the shit out her afterwards.

Good Job.

John

There should be a warning for stories like this!

You are one sick puppy to even have this kind of shit in your head.

STORY IDEA BASED ON TRUE FACTS

Details on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com. Serial cheating wife exposed. That Facebook info cost her college instructor position in Helena Montana. Reputed to be so refined-epitome of class. 50ish Grandmother-3rd husband-black widow purple rose tattoos 36C implanted breasts-scar above right one-threeway with bff also serial cheater.
Wanted ''TAKE THAT BITCH FACIAL'' got pearl necklace seed scooped up and smeared on face-she did not wash it off
Begged for student to urinate on her clitoris-insisted on being called a whore
Lover ripped off bra and panties-filled her with two loads-sent her to teach class in thin tight sweater-obvious she wasn't wearing bra-wrote email how his cum ran down her thighs while standing pantyless in skirt in front of class-students in fron noticed-told others
For close to year every Friday husband who worked out of town all week fixing railroad railbed would find her cum-filled panties still wet and warm on floor-pressed them to his face while watching her bathe getting aroused for once a week blowjob
SHE LOVED THAT HUMILIATION
CAME TIME SHE CUT-OFF BLOWJOBS BUT STILL LEFT CREAM FILLED PANTIES
Last heard she worked for Montana Secretary of State

PRIOR TRUE STORY

She was always looking for next lover. Wanted at least two concurrent affairs
Contact info can be had from Facebook
She liked telling stories about her conquests despite student begging her not to do so.
His marriage-relationship with sons-his job-his reputation
She told him she enjoyed treating him in cruel hateful manner
Laughed about destruction she caused
Said she did not care how many lives she destroyed
Facebook profile creator friend of student trying to set record straight
PERHAPS HELP KARMA
REQUESTS YOUR ASSISTANCE

Gay shit

Put this story in the gay section please - "it sucks" if you get my meaning!

re:johnstang2

this is not a cuckold story? yes it is. Any wife that fucks another man, makes her husband a cuckold. End of story. It's hilarious you cuckolds don't even know the meaning of the word. Goggle "cuckold" and learn.
As to the statement, "there should be a warning about stories like this". There are. It's called the "tags". This one had, "hotwife", "cheating wife", "slutwife". Man isn't that warning enough what to expect?

To The Previous Commenter

Thank you so much for your recent lectures. I'm sure that the readers will give them the attention they deserve.

Wow, This is LMN Level

I retreated to my study to avoid the back-to-back Lifetime Movie Network "thrillers" my female relatives are watching. Unfortunately, this story is making me want to go back out there to watch LMN.

It's like there was a checklist for this kind of story and the writer put down some words and checked off the list. It's rushed with little setup.

Not hot at all.

TRULY A COMPLETE SLUT

She gets lonely so the marriage vows no longer apply. Really?
I've been reading this shit now for a couple of months and I could never quite put my finger on what was off with these stories and then it hit me like a ton of bricks.
I always wondered about the writers (I'm convinced there only 3-4 of these guys) having the loving wife or girlfriend say something about it only being sex. For the longest time that pissed me off because it made no sense...and then it struck me why it doesn't make sense. Women are so different from men that it's said we're from different planets. Women are all about connecting on the emotional level so for woman to go all out for sex with some strange dick there would have to be a strong emotional connection with the person connected to that strange dick. So much so that she wouldn’t have the connection to the poor husband or boyfriend she has chosen to abandon. She simply would not make these hollow meaningless protestations of deep, unfailing love and devotion for the jilted husband or boyfriend these 3 writers find so compelling.
Bottom line is that the stories are written so obviously from a man's point of view that it makes the story completely unbelievable, just so much hogwash. Men do believe it could be "just sex" because men think with their dicks, the lower head rules the upper head. But women are all about the heart and without that engaged, there really isn't that strong a sex drive, not on the level these 4 writers try to convey. Now if she's transferred the love, then the story makes sense up to the point of all the i love and only you bullshit.
So please, continue to write this shit, just make sure you give the betrayed husband/boyfriend plenty of ammunition to go for the nuclear response when he burns the bitch and her bastard by having the caught slut say something like "yeah, his dick is bigger, he lasts longer, I get a complete meal when I swallow his load and I think I've developed a deeper love for him than I ever had with you...if I ever loved you at all'. Then just go for the all out assault letting the betrayed not be more than fair, to want to deeply hurt the woman I'll probably always love. I think you would have a deeper fan base from the btb crowd if you'd just turn the cuckolds loose to totally rampage that sluts life the way real American men would when faced with that kind of emasculation

Well written

Story subject not to my liking but, well written.
:Writing Three Stars
:Subject (for me) one star.

For commenters who don't know!

Some of you don't know shit! A cuckold either knows or doesn't know what is happening. Just like the grammar police the word experts. Many of them don't know shit!
Middle English cokewald, from Anglo-Norman *cucuald, from cucu, the cuckoo, from Vulgar Latin *cucc&umacron;lus, from Latin cuc&umacron;lus.
Word History: The allusion to the cuckoo on which the word cuckold is based may not be appreciated by those unfamiliar with the nesting habits of certain varieties of this bird. The female of some cuckoos lays its eggs in the nests of other birds, leaving them to be cared for by the resident nesters. This parasitic tendency has given the female bird a figurative reputation for unfaithfulness as well. Hence in Old French we find the word cucuault, composed of cocu, “cuckoo, cuckold,” and the pejorative suffix –ald, used to designate a husband whose wife has wandered afield like the female cuckoo. An earlier assumed form of the Old French word was borrowed into Middle English by way of Anglo-Norman. Middle English cokewold, the ancestor of Modern English cuckold, is first recorded in a work written around 1250.
Read more at http://www.yourdictionary.com/cuckold#0kxRj8DudrTw USOu.

not quite as bad

But close.
Married female college instructor had coerced younger male student in a writing class she taught at school in Helena Montana to fuck her at least 3 days a week for 13 months.
She gradually asked to be treated in a more and more degrading manner. Begged for anal sex on first date-rented apartment above truck repair shop on Carter Drive and would scream in orgasm begging him to all her a WHORE!!
She revelled in knowing the mechanics could her her load pleadings and blushed in excitement and shame when they gathered to leer at her each month as she paid rent. She knew the owner's wife/bookkeeper thought she was a slut glaring at her when handing her the receipt always sneerin there you go MRS!! EICh******. How is the tutoring going?
She begged for her butt to be slapped, pleaded with him to tear her clothes off and was repeated sent to teach afternoon classes braless and pantieless, those garments left shredded on floor. She knew her nipples to be obvious through the tight thin top and shivered feeling his cum oozing7 down her thighs past her knees while she stood on display in front of her class..snickers accompanied pointing fingers as the whole class took note of the slimy white trail. One day she dropped her marking pen and while bending to retrieve it a small squelch followed by a splat seemed to echo as a huge dollop of semen dripped out of her full vagina onto the linoleum floor. She begged her student to grab her hair and ejaculate on her face saying TAKE THAT BITCH and whenever her had ejaculated during a fuck of her implanted 36C breasts he would scoop up his cream and smear it onto her face where she left it to dry marvelling how tight it made her skin
But she certainly hit bottom when she would sit on the toilet bare ass naked after lengthy fuck and spreading her labia and pulling up her clitoral sheath she pleaded over and over for him to urinate on her clit.
The dichotomy of asking for such a degrading7 act in such proper terms