A Black Werewolf in Texas

I had hoped we were done

The break you took has done nothing to improve your writing at all. Maybe try a much longer break before you write again.

Go ahead and write more chapters

Very good story, I gave it a 5

Another classic Samuelx story. The it has less to do with his writing ability, and far more to do with his racial-centric (translated as he's as racist as you can get) approach to story telling that makes his stories so intolerably bad. Honestly, if your stories were focused on the plot, rather than who was what race, your stories would be far more likely to be enjoyed. But this is Samuelx. So I suspect this suggestion will fall on deaf ears... yet again.