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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata06/07/04

Nice

capture of the D/s interplay.
Well done and very sexy !

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by Whispering_Wolf5706/07/04

Great!

I love this poetry of yours, I wish you the best baby

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by Kitten8906/28/09

vivid

You are very good at painting a picture, I can see everything as I read it, well done. I feel like the rhyming is a little forced at times. Keep on writing.

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