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Fresh approach
to a common dlemna- at least for me. Recently fought that duel and lost.
Novel...
...idea made better still by original imagery as a writer fights one of the many endless with her own words. Very good stuff!
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So why isn't it called "I can?t write a poem without a title"? You could subtitle it, of course, but I guess that would be a dual title. Fun poem, Ms. Monroe!
Fun
and playful. Nice job.
Delete?
Perhaps you might delete the persons comment, that was so rude. I liked your literary Art, it expresses you. I thought it had a great twist from normal poetry, Your creativity was wonderful to read, don't let the unhappy people who can't write or has to comment with negativity bother you, remember every body has an ass hole...hehehe.
loved your poem.
Some wonderful wordplay in this one...
I like the way you poke fun at something most poets fret over, something that can often make or break a poem. I liked the rhyme play especially with some sporatic and linked rhyme adding to the playfulness in the poem. "A word smoothie??" LOL... I have never heard a poem defined quite that way, but yes, I think it works in this context. A fun, fun poem, very nice.
jim : )
Word smoothie
Only you can put something tasty in everything you write ;) I bet it's a reflex thought by now isn't it? I like..
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.
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