totally agree, very realistic. This author gives just the right amount of detail in every scene and continues to impress me- I will be anxiously awaiting new submissions :)
Having just read your second submission here, looking forward very much to reading more of your work.
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Anonymous12/24/16
Great
Just read both of your stories and Jesus are they hot. I wish there were more; keep writing like this and you'll have a life time fan.
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Anonymous02/25/17
My new favorite!!!
More! More! More please!!! Ohhhh this was amazing! Could you do one where he calls her a good girl and strokes her hair? I loved the story progression! Please make an audio of this! It's hard to pleasure myself and read at the same time ;)
Very nice story
Very realistic story. Many friends relationships progress when circumstances are right.
LOVE
totally agree, very realistic. This author gives just the right amount of detail in every scene and continues to impress me- I will be anxiously awaiting new submissions :)
good!!
verry nice story will there be a 2nd story ?
Fantastic debut!
Having just read your second submission here, looking forward very much to reading more of your work.
Great
Just read both of your stories and Jesus are they hot. I wish there were more; keep writing like this and you'll have a life time fan.
My new favorite!!!
More! More! More please!!! Ohhhh this was amazing! Could you do one where he calls her a good girl and strokes her hair? I loved the story progression! Please make an audio of this! It's hard to pleasure myself and read at the same time ;)
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