While I won't say it was great the plot and all was well thought of with a few grammar errors it will make another chapter something to look forward to when you write the story.
Aneat twist to the story at the end. 5*
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Good story
While I won't say it was great the plot and all was well thought of with a few grammar errors it will make another chapter something to look forward to when you write the story.
Loving wife
Aneat twist to the story at the end. 5*
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