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Chapter 2
you'd better finish this!
Please don't....
Just....stop here. Go get a fifth of tequila and try to write the most boring normal sex situations you can, then give it to an editor. I will bet you that you can come up with something better than this. Sorry, but I just don't like it.
Classy Woman
See above.
Are you the
12 year old brother of one of the other authors of the day?
I thought minors and mentaly ill authors were banned fro submitting.
This story is not only immature but also moronic...
This story is not only immature but also moronic...The worst part in it? The "More to come"! 1* (Where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
Very distasteful story
Maybe you should finish this one in the Fetish section. PLEASE
Idiotic!!! MINUS 5*!!!
Only lazghable what a bunch of crap idiots can write!!!
Makes perfect sense.
Chicago. Remember who these pussies voted for.
To save time
I no longer read the stories,I just go to the comments and let impo, twentyseven and others tell me about the story.Thanks fellas.What would we do without your wisdom on these stories.
Cool user name
Not a cool story. Present tense rarely works (it doesn't here). Cum slurping is a fetish and belongs there. 25 stories on the new page and only Rnebular's series worth reading. The sewage plant is at full discharge.
WTF Nasty
Sounds like a disease waiting to happen. Nothing sexy or erotic here
@25624chicago's biography
Is the same as being an Anonymous. Not even the age. Are you sure you have the legal age to post in LW? This is below zero.
Don't give up the day job.
Don't give up your day job.
Nasty story
This was one of those stories where when finish, I thought I cant believe I wasted time reading that shit.
Nasty quick flash story
Acquired taste, should put it in Fetish. Know the LW crowd won't generally like this stuff. But the Fetish readers, will.
Domme
She's a dominant woman so it seems. Didn't see the strap on coming into the picture. Going to make for an interesting part 2
lousy story
bloody waste of time
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