Enjoyable. One main concern - pronouns aren't quite enough most of the time in a lesbian story and it's hard to keep track of who's who sometimes.
Well, one night stand stories aren't really my thing, and the somewhat abrupt ending caught be a bit flat-footed, but it was still hot.
Thanks for the warm and encouraging comments, it makes it worth while. There will be sequels for both these characters as they part company and find new loves, not sure how many stories but we'll see. I think Samantha has started coming out and Wendy is definitely thirsting for more action. As to whether they'll get back together again, anything is possible.
Amazing
This was lovely. Great story writing. 😍
Enjoyable. One main concern - pronouns aren't quite enough most of the time in a lesbian story and it's hard to keep track of who's who sometimes.
Well, one night stand stories aren't really my thing, and the somewhat abrupt ending caught be a bit flat-footed, but it was still hot.
not bad
I really like the cowgirl theme, and the humor was pretty good as well, hope there is another part
This was a pretty decent story. I hope there will be more between these two.
Well done
I'd like to see this evolve into more than a one night stand. Please continue.
Re: Sequel requests.
Thanks for the warm and encouraging comments, it makes it worth while. There will be sequels for both these characters as they part company and find new loves, not sure how many stories but we'll see. I think Samantha has started coming out and Wendy is definitely thirsting for more action. As to whether they'll get back together again, anything is possible.
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No, no! Keep them together.
Bitter sweet
Great story.
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