All Comments on 'Uncle Ben Has Taken My Wife'

I think one chapter of this story is more than enough.

Must be the biggest load of garbage ever written

there is nothing less than 0 on the scale. We need a category for cuckhold wimps and the women who screw them over. Loving wives doesn't fit most of the stories published there.

George

Different strokes for different folks, I spose. Gave you a five cos can't be easy having a weener and wife with a smelly cunt.

You should have posted this in the humor section if there is one. Loving Wives? I don't think so.

Please keep the rest of this shit in your own stool. No need to share anymore with us.

Gary

smelly wife.

Don't know about anyone else, but yeah, it gets me wet LOL

DO THE READER OF LITEROTICA.COM A FAVOR KEEP YOUR DAY JOB AND LET YOUR WIFE UNCLE KEEP HER.

I encourage you to write more. This is my kind of story...keep it up.

Just when I think stories can't get any dumber or less erotic, crap like this comes along.

take the panty shields off your eyes, long enough to smell the rotting skunk of her pussy

Feel the rubbery limpness of his cock move across your lips as you gather the gangrene like scabs from her lips.

You want more?

This type of story has been told and told and told and told......and told so much that this effort is not worth adding it's odor to an already huge pile of smelly crap. If this is a true story, you have my sympathy. Get out of it while you can.

I love cuckolding stories, but this is just sicko. Wish you were among the many good erotic femdom cuckold writers, rather than someone who is fixated on golden showers, body odor, fat people and rimming. Real garbage and a waste of everyone's time. Do us all a favor and put your energy in your job. You are wasting your efforts if this is all you can do for Literotica. Cheers.

This is your only story? Let's hope it's the last with crap like this.

this is the dumbest story I have ever read. Like it is real....good lord.

this has to be the lowest scored story ever posted. I hope that you wrote this as a joke.

Both at the story and comments left.

What a mess. No use going into a full blown detailed description of why this story sucked...

...that in America, "Uncle Ben's" is a popular brand of instant rice. Which made the story unintentionally hilarious to read, thinking of the kindly (-looking) old man on the package.

>Shortly after our wedding Fran seemed to change. She ate a lot more and inevitably put on weight.

Give up the rice, Fran! Go on Atkins, or the South Beach Diet! Eating Uncle Ben's is just packing on the pounds.

I give points for the laughs

(LOLLLLL at the last post)

Oh please don't write another one..that was sick!!

Starting with a fat chick does nothing for alot of guys.

And the info on the pit, ass, and piss licking is just not a pretty picture. But as for the chuckold you have a base to start another story. So try again becaus the next one will be better!

That was the most disgusting thing I've ever read.

It was too silly to waste more of my time reading.

get a fucking life ya pussy. Please quit writting YOU SUCK!

Please find another hobby

Ignore the haters, the story is a cuckold humiliation story, and a great one at that. Those bashing this story simply don't like that genre.

this is what cuckolding is all about.

Wrong catagory fag this should be in the gay catagory you sick bastard!

Don't let these idiot comments deter your excellent writing, keep up the good work.

Write something worth reading...

Very nice, I loved the first one mostly but not very keen on the stuff where they made him lick his dirty ass.

My opinion is that you are good in writing and you should write more stories and I love stories with wife watching, submission, etc.

My name is Leon and the author can write to me so that I can tell him my problems with my wife and maybe inspire him to write something else.

Please write to LeonSp2010 at g m a i l dot c o m

Please don't write anymore about this.

Not too crazy about the fat wife - mine is slim with big tits - but as an experienced cuckold I would have loved having 'Uncle Ben' breed and seed me with his 10" sausage cock! The biggest I've taken so far in front of my wife was just over 8 1/2'

You are one fucked up pathetic little asshole.

Well you can divorce your wife and marry a man and be happy.

Your wife will have to wait forever until they legalize incestuous marriage, maybe.

You've already written enough, stomachs won't stand any further undigested puke.

1*

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote

and jump the fuck off it

Another sad and pathetic story. This site draws so many of the same old stupidity.

Which belongs in gay male as that trumps everything else. But the simply solution is to call the police and ask them to do some testing at the hospital. Which leads to the arrest of his bitch wife and Uncle since their urine would show up in the tests. This story is just awful. Why Lit allows this crap to be posted is beyond me.

Sad. Sick. Perverted. Disgusting. Disturbing. Just awful

Disgusting story about disgusting people acting in disgusting ways doing disgusting things. Zero redeeming value here. Complete waste of time.

Uncle Ben needs to be boiled for five minutes on high heat.